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Give Me Your Ugly
To merely fuck your body alone would be a complete travesty,
I want to make love to everything ugly, all of your scars and pain
Share with me every single emotional and physical tragedy,
Show me marks that have caused your heart distain
Allow me to pull back every layer you hide within your heart,
Let me penetrate your mind and search for every secret and sin you carry
Well beyond your flesh and limbs alone is that where I wish to start,
Allow me to see each and every fear in which makes you so very weary
Beneath bare bones, hidden in skin are places so deep and in your soul only do they reside,
Those are the places that I want to search, to treasure and to know
Show me every thing that hurts you beyond words, kept pent up inside
Once I make love to everything ugly, then will I fuck you you, setting your body aglow
For you, my sweetest one, do I wish to soothe you in ecstasy,
To merely fuck your body alone would be a complete travesty
I want to make love to everything ugly, all of your scars and pain
Share with me every single emotional and physical tragedy,
Show me marks that have caused your heart distain
Allow me to pull back every layer you hide within your heart,
Let me penetrate your mind and search for every secret and sin you carry
Well beyond your flesh and limbs alone is that where I wish to start,
Allow me to see each and every fear in which makes you so very weary
Beneath bare bones, hidden in skin are places so deep and in your soul only do they reside,
Those are the places that I want to search, to treasure and to know
Show me every thing that hurts you beyond words, kept pent up inside
Once I make love to everything ugly, then will I fuck you you, setting your body aglow
For you, my sweetest one, do I wish to soothe you in ecstasy,
To merely fuck your body alone would be a complete travesty
Published 3rd Aug 2018
| Edited 9th Mar 2019
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Anonymous
4th Aug 2018 00:38am
Beautifully intarsed with emotions and reality. Love is absolute. The strongest emotion ever and bares nothing in its presence. Well done. J.
4th Aug 2018 10:34pm
4th Aug 2018 1:31am
A beautiful poem! Having a person open up all of their vulnerability to you is a humble experience and something that should be held sacred. Acceptance of everything, including the ugly, is pure love, and the joining is much sweeter.
Well done!
Well done!
4th Aug 2018 4:21am
4th Aug 2018 2:11am
I really enjoy this poem!! The first line seemed extremely crass and dirty, but then you made it into such a romantic thing. I love this.
4th Aug 2018 3:12am
4th Aug 2018 5:41am
4th Aug 2018 5:50pm
4th Aug 2018 8:26am
Echo LunasChild. This is true lovemaking, a giving of everything warts and all to each other.
BTW did you know an anagram of NUDITY is UNTIDY? We can't all be blessed with production line perfection, so the degree of acceptance of imperfections (though it's not just physical ones here) is most welcome from any lover.
BTW did you know an anagram of NUDITY is UNTIDY? We can't all be blessed with production line perfection, so the degree of acceptance of imperfections (though it's not just physical ones here) is most welcome from any lover.
4th Aug 2018 5:52pm
Thank you, Solomon. Perfection can always be found among the imperfections!!
Brava Pandora! Thiis is truly beautiful. There is nothing more sensual then to lay bare our souls to another without judgement from either side. To be completely vulnerable to one another. Well painted desire.
4th Aug 2018 5:55pm
Thank you so much! I absolutely agree, to be bare is the only place to find a lovers true beauty and for those to be accepted and loved regardless..
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