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Well............CRAP
I'm not quite sure
of what is worse
the body or mind
which gives out first
but it's now quite clear
I need a new muse
cause the one I've got
is now of no use
I only know that
I'm drowning in lust
for what has left me
in seemingly dust
for while letting the dog out
for her constitution,
watching a hummingbird,
and searching solutions
I found my mind again being tweaked
wondering if their shit's also sweet
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Re. Well............CRAP
2nd Aug 2018 7:13pm
Re: Re. Well............CRAP
3rd Aug 2018 4:38pm
Re. Well............CRAP
2nd Aug 2018 7:19pm
Ha ha! It probably is :) Good luck with that sweet-fecesed muse. But be beware they can be pretty fecal.
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Re: Re. Well............CRAP
3rd Aug 2018 5:21pm
:-)))))))))))))
Love the way you play off words, they fit well within my wheelhouse,
Thanks so much, Bob
Love the way you play off words, they fit well within my wheelhouse,
Thanks so much, Bob
Re: Re. Well............CRAP
3rd Aug 2018 4:39pm
Re. Well............CRAP
2nd Aug 2018 7:43pm
Re: Re. Well............CRAP
3rd Aug 2018 4:45pm
I hope when yours returns it's got something sweeter in mind. :-)
Thanks, Ange
Thanks, Ange
Re. Well............CRAP
2nd Aug 2018 8:25pm
beautiful Teri I feel you
the muse is fickle
she speaks when she wants too...
this is great...
love Brenda
the muse is fickle
she speaks when she wants too...
this is great...
love Brenda
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Re: Re. Well............CRAP
3rd Aug 2018 4:57pm
Re. Well............CRAP
2nd Aug 2018 10:15pm
My only recourse when
my muse goes on holiday ...
is to write about the fickle witch...
Usually, she comes back... dying of curiosity... ely
my muse goes on holiday ...
is to write about the fickle witch...
Usually, she comes back... dying of curiosity... ely
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Re: Re. Well............CRAP
3rd Aug 2018 5:07pm
Hoping this will keep her from leaving so often.
I'm not so good on my own.
Thanks much, Ely
I'm not so good on my own.
Thanks much, Ely
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3rd Aug 2018 5:14pm
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Re: Re. Well............CRAP
3rd Aug 2018 5:16pm
Well, I'm not going to touch upon this subject matter. :-)
Always good exchanging with you, Hans.
Thanks for visiting.
Always good exchanging with you, Hans.
Thanks for visiting.