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Fifteen Minutes
Fifteen minutes to sunset
we haven't got a care
walking along the beach front
letting worries disappear
reds skies are pushing closer
my fingers tangle in your hair
two hearts be still and wonder
in comfort there is no fear
waves come wash upon us
there is magic in the air
splashed across the silence
where souls are stripping bare
the sun lays down on the horizon
offering the most glorious of views
I keep looking your way
for my gaze is stuck on you
we haven't got a care
walking along the beach front
letting worries disappear
reds skies are pushing closer
my fingers tangle in your hair
two hearts be still and wonder
in comfort there is no fear
waves come wash upon us
there is magic in the air
splashed across the silence
where souls are stripping bare
the sun lays down on the horizon
offering the most glorious of views
I keep looking your way
for my gaze is stuck on you
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Re. Fifteen Minutes
2nd Aug 2018 2:32pm
So light and carefree, the way we all want to be
with our loved one, on the beach, at sunset, soaking up each other
Beautiful
#Pixel
with our loved one, on the beach, at sunset, soaking up each other
Beautiful
#Pixel
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2nd Aug 2018 2:37pm
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Anonymous
2nd Aug 2018 2:37pm
What a beautiful moment captured in time, Tim. Big smiles here :-)
...Willow
...Willow

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2nd Aug 2018 2:40pm
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2nd Aug 2018 3:17pm
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2nd Aug 2018 6:35pm
Bravo Time! I wish I could be on some romantic beach instead of in inner-city Summer swelter...thanks for bringing it to me.
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2nd Aug 2018 6:45pm
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2nd Aug 2018 6:48pm
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2nd Aug 2018 7:13pm
Enjoy the entire poem, but that last stanza is so romantic! I love that choice of views. I'd rather gaze at a beautiful woman than the available scenery.
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Anonymous
2nd Aug 2018 7:16pm
Such a beautiful romantic poem! Loved it!

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Re. Fifteen Minutes
2nd Aug 2018 8:23pm
so beautiful dearest Tim
nothing better the ocean and someone you love sigh awesome :)
love Brenda
nothing better the ocean and someone you love sigh awesome :)
love Brenda
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2nd Aug 2018 8:45pm
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3rd Aug 2018 1:05am
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3rd Aug 2018 1:08am
Thank you my friend. I believe flow is very important in poetry. I appreciate the compliment.
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3rd Aug 2018 1:30pm
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Anonymous
7th Aug 2018 8:24am
Must be some view to graze upon if even a gorgeous sunset can't distract :P
Beautiful as ever
Beautiful as ever

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