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An Inspiring Thought
There's a stillness to the morn
the blue just drifts away
lush greens have lain her tenderness
as eyes embrace the day
entreat the ways you conjure
your sun does rise and warm
succumb to every essence
invoked in the simplest of form
brighten as clouds come upon us
and tomorrow a tumultuous time
gather your strength and tranquility
in face of these mountains we climb
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Re. An Inspiring Thought
1st Aug 2018 3:52pm
This is a beautiful humble piece. Your rhythm and rhyme are easy flow and images are positive and motivating.
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1st Aug 2018 3:54pm
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Anonymous
1st Aug 2018 6:02pm
This is indeed an inspiring write! Beautiful flow! Really like this!👌

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1st Aug 2018 7:03pm
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Anonymous
1st Aug 2018 6:03pm
A very uplifting piece this morning, Tim. Tranquil and warm :-)
...Willow
...Willow

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1st Aug 2018 7:04pm
Re. An Inspiring Thought
1st Aug 2018 7:20pm
Bravo Tim! Serene piece. I like this instruction:
"gather your strength and tranquility
in face of these mountains we climb"
"gather your strength and tranquility
in face of these mountains we climb"
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Re. An Inspiring Thought
1st Aug 2018 10:09pm
A gorgeous write that depicts the stillness and beauty of morning contemplation !
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1st Aug 2018 11:31pm
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