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Laissez Faire
The p0licy was "laissez faire"
To do whatever I so pleased
I taught her not to whine and glare
Ordered to drop upon her knees
My cock parted her moistened lips
Then found its way into her throat
Delighted as it slips and slides
She leaving a saliva coat
I do my best to make it last
Slowing the rhythm to a crawl
Yet I can't help but let it blast
Ambrosia cum, she swallows all.
To do whatever I so pleased
I taught her not to whine and glare
Ordered to drop upon her knees
My cock parted her moistened lips
Then found its way into her throat
Delighted as it slips and slides
She leaving a saliva coat
I do my best to make it last
Slowing the rhythm to a crawl
Yet I can't help but let it blast
Ambrosia cum, she swallows all.
Published 31st Jul 2018
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31st Jul 2018 11:17pm
damn it this is sexy and smooth dearest Sir Crow
fuck me it's great ;)
love Crim
fuck me it's great ;)
love Crim
31st Jul 2018 11:28pm
Thanks Crim. I've been trying to keep track of the syllable count to make mine read better. Kind of fun! So glad you enjoyed this!
31st Jul 2018 11:38pm
you're doing really awesome I'm not disciplined enough to do that yet but when your poem has an internal flow it's vital that's why my rhythm is so often off... I need to learn to do that...
love Crim
love Crim
Anonymous
31st Jul 2018 11:47pm
Loved it Messere. It just brought to my mind a recent memory. I love it when poetry is like a mirror. This is a great piece my friend. J.
31st Jul 2018 11:51pm
Glad you enjoyed this juvenalis, and am delighted it brought back what is hopefully an ecstatic memory. Thanks so much for the comment and RL entry!
Anonymous
1st Aug 2018 00:27am
A true pleasure.
Anonymous
1st Aug 2018 3:32am
So naughty, this poem is well written.
2nd Aug 2018 00:45am
Anonymous
2nd Aug 2018 2:45am
I agree.
Bravo Sir Crow! You capture the intensity of the build really well in this piece. The pic, reminiscent of a vampiress, just on a more protein rich diet.
2nd Aug 2018 00:47am
Love your sense of humor, Gahdess! Thank you! A little protein goes a long way...…...
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