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untitled VII
the world
fucks us
over until
we are
pregnant
with fear
and want
(c) 2018 R R. Zinn
Published 31st Jul 2018
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31st Jul 2018 3:58am
31st Jul 2018 5:57am
I guess you have never seen Woody Allen's film,"Everything you ever really wanted to know about Sex, but were afraid to ask"?
One of the skits was a bunch of sperm exitedly waiting in a white room, to make their glorious exit down the tube, on the race toward fertilization...
They become more exited as their moment approaches... then... Climax! and the race is on!!...
... only to meet the first sperm swimming madly back up the tube, yelling... ABORT, ABORT.!!! Go back! BLOW JOB!! BLOWJOB!!
It was a Classic... hugs... ely
One of the skits was a bunch of sperm exitedly waiting in a white room, to make their glorious exit down the tube, on the race toward fertilization...
They become more exited as their moment approaches... then... Climax! and the race is on!!...
... only to meet the first sperm swimming madly back up the tube, yelling... ABORT, ABORT.!!! Go back! BLOW JOB!! BLOWJOB!!
It was a Classic... hugs... ely
31st Jul 2018 7:11am
B-kitty... thats an awesome little poem... great use of imagery. You are on the roll. Write On! ely
31st Jul 2018 10:59am
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31st Jul 2018 10:21pm
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31st Jul 2018 10:37pm
6th Aug 2018 11:04am
You say so much in so few words , i like how you used the word " pregnant " its interesting because it makes me think of a feelin held within the stomach .. The world has caused us fear and that fear is unwanted . A sad thing but somehow we need to let that fear go and release it somehow . An example people who have been traumatised in this world so many are left feelin fearful of life and of the world at times they do not even feel safe in their body . Its a sad thing how the world can impact us in such negative and awful ways if it were not for the bad people in the world and the cruelty which lives in this world surely more of us would be happier ?
14th Aug 2018 3:06am
Sorry for such a delayed response, however my house was damaged by water in the middle of restoration at this time. I'm not sure if this world can alter the course it is on. As always it is good to hear from you Daffodil.
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