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dark mountain
shadowing old farming lands
young feeding geese
wet by the ice blue
salt soaked new sea,
brooding time watches through October winds
across Glencoe valley & beyond this land
holding dreams of lives gone before
as life struggles to climb higher
sodden grasses squelch
wood breathes with a quiet sigh
fresh rain kisses, making love with hard rock...
children, women, men die
(like winter clouds giving up their meaning)
young feeding geese
wet by the ice blue
salt soaked new sea,
brooding time watches through October winds
across Glencoe valley & beyond this land
holding dreams of lives gone before
as life struggles to climb higher
sodden grasses squelch
wood breathes with a quiet sigh
fresh rain kisses, making love with hard rock...
children, women, men die
(like winter clouds giving up their meaning)
Published 25th Oct 2011
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especially, at the end, the bond we all must share.
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25th Oct 2011 6:55pm
Graham this put me in such a wonderful mood reading this..I was truly transported to Glencoe valley and beyond..stunning..peace Crim :)
Anonymous
28th Oct 2011 9:41am
Wonderful writing Graham... your poems always create vivid images in my mind.
"fresh rain kisses, making love with hard rock..."
I love this line. A very original and beautiful example of personification.
"fresh rain kisses, making love with hard rock..."
I love this line. A very original and beautiful example of personification.
2nd Nov 2011 9:03am
You have made a very stressed woman relax!
Right now I choose your poetry for a buzz instead of beer!
Right now I choose your poetry for a buzz instead of beer!
2nd Nov 2011 10:31am
