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smoking pussy
"can I blow smoke on your pussy?"
.........i looked at him and said
"will it get me any higher?"
.........i looked at him and said
"will it get me any higher?"
Published 30th Jul 2018
Author's Note
Dartmouth inspired writing style
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Anonymous
30th Jul 2018 1:30am
I love the irony. Very good provocation. Like it. J.
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4th Aug 2018 6:03am
No. I made a promise I wouldn't be on this dudes list years ago. Luckily I remembered in time to stop. But of course the one I promised thinks otherwise.....
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10th Nov 2019 8:14am
LOL - depends on the nature of the smoke. Words 'high thigh' come to mind!
15th Nov 2019 2:04am
15th Nov 2019 10:15pm
Intentional word order - I mean your thighs getting high on drugged smoke.
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18th Nov 2019 1:25pm
i like this piece just those few words create a scene of mind play...nicely done
Anonymous
20th Nov 2019 5:17am
a piece that has texture...invites the reader to find more than one meaning. Well written!
Anonymous
29th Nov 2019 00:35am
Your sense of tone and imagination are excellent! I'm one of many who hope you'll write more!
23rd Jan 2020 6:58pm
Uh no ....it really happened. And that's what was said....did I let him...yeah ....(c'mon who's gonna turn down free head?)
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