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Sweet White Lily
I give you my sweet white Lily
My petals a treasure from heaven above Soft and plush like that of crushed velvet Tender and pink do they lay beneath My scent so gloriously enticing
A most devine essence to behold Petal upon sweet petal for you to unfold Detailed and like braille do you then trace For my bud there under will you bequeath At it's core, sticky and sweet does it reside For you alone, the gift of my sweet white Lily
My petals a treasure from heaven above Soft and plush like that of crushed velvet Tender and pink do they lay beneath My scent so gloriously enticing
A most devine essence to behold Petal upon sweet petal for you to unfold Detailed and like braille do you then trace For my bud there under will you bequeath At it's core, sticky and sweet does it reside For you alone, the gift of my sweet white Lily
Published 29th Jul 2018
| Edited 9th Mar 2019
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Anonymous
29th Jul 2018 11:42pm
Very sweet and chaste. It's a lovely peace of poetic beauty. Well done. J.
30th Jul 2018 7:17pm
30th Jul 2018 00:10am
An excellent and divine poem, Pandora! Your words tease our skin with soft kisses and leave us wanting more.
Well done!
Well done!
30th Jul 2018 7:18pm
30th Jul 2018 00:26am
I love flowers...yours sounds so beautiful,,,grown in a garden of delights...loved this Pandora
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4th Aug 2018 4:46pm
Brava Pandora! I equate the Lily with the rebirth of Spring. Your imagery is so vivid and sensual. And again with the scent...one of my favorite of the senses for sure.
4th Aug 2018 5:59pm
I truly appreciate the kind words. A flower is by far the greatest example to describe that sweet V, imo..
4th Aug 2018 7:44pm
