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Alter of Sweet Sin
Laying poised and ready
An open invitation longing for his arrival
To be taken, strong and steady
Beckoned by my scent, am I desirable
My back and hips arched
For I am his alter of sweet sin
My velvet for him never parched
Willing wet flesh to leave his seed within
Awaiting him to ravage my heated desire
My flames to be extinguished and reignited Upon this throne will he perspire
Flesh to flesh, will we sinfully be united
An open invitation longing for his arrival
To be taken, strong and steady
Beckoned by my scent, am I desirable
My back and hips arched
For I am his alter of sweet sin
My velvet for him never parched
Willing wet flesh to leave his seed within
Awaiting him to ravage my heated desire
My flames to be extinguished and reignited Upon this throne will he perspire
Flesh to flesh, will we sinfully be united
Published 29th Jul 2018
| Edited 9th Mar 2019
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29th Jul 2018 5:12am
love the rhyming, and everything else...always get a 'buzz' from your 'imagination'...
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Anonymous
29th Jul 2018 11:01am
I love the genre and I believe everyone knows that by now, but you have the power of making become more and more inviting each time. Similarities in our ways of seeing (I say similarities and not equalities, because each us has ideas and principles and thank God for that) and life experiences, like pain, sadness, feelings of confusion and regret, make me always come back for more. You have elegance always, I am crude and harsh mostly. But I love to rest and breathe the purity of an argument which I love, live and breathe as you describe it. I can only say excellent and exceptional ink. J.
29th Jul 2018 9:00pm
You always flatter me and I love the effort and time you invest in every comment..thank you for that!
I don't see your work as being crude, nor mine quite elegant. We're too deep souls lost in deep thoughts, embracing and molding passionate words. I do hope you keep coming back nevertheless my friend!
I don't see your work as being crude, nor mine quite elegant. We're too deep souls lost in deep thoughts, embracing and molding passionate words. I do hope you keep coming back nevertheless my friend!
Anonymous
29th Jul 2018 9:12pm
I am lustful my dear friend, I always come back for more. 😎J.
29th Jul 2018 9:19pm
Anonymous
29th Jul 2018 9:38pm
Thank you. You've made my day. Truly😊J
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4th Aug 2018 8:18pm
Brava Pandora! You know I like the scent part. This passage and image is beautiful "For I am his alter of sweet sin." The "velvet" metaphor is so perfect for "V"
4th Aug 2018 10:28pm
Oh I kindly thank you. I actually got the reference from a book called "Tipping the Velvet ". It wasn't a good read but the term sure stuck with me.
