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SENRYU: A BAD PLACE
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SENRYU: A BAD PLACE
Hopeless, languishing
Darkness impermeable
Come now blessed dawn
Written by
Gahddess_Worship
(Osomajestuoso)
Published
28th Jul 2018
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Banking on "it's always darkest before the dawn,"
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#anxiety
#dark
#depression
#LifeStruggles
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Re. SENRYU: A BAD PLACE
crowfly
28th Jul 2018 8:33pm
A sad one, but such eloquence in three lines! Fine work, Gahdess!
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Gahddess_Worship
(Osomajestuoso)
28th Jul 2018 11:22pm
Thank you Sir Crow! We all have our dark times and although it may seem at time that misery is eternal the Sun always rises.
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Re. SENRYU: A BAD PLACE
LunasChild8
29th Jul 2018 1:07am
I love the sense of hope you put at the end. Bravo!
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Gahddess_Worship
(Osomajestuoso)
29th Jul 2018 1:14am
Muchisimas Gracias, Luna! Siempre hay esperanza.
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Re. SENRYU: A BAD PLACE
Anonymous
29th Jul 2018 5:07pm
Love how this conveys depth in such sparse words.
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