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Don't kiss me, goodbye
The eternal winds of change have shifted.
You've evaporated into a beautiful whisper
and I, into the clouds.
Equinox is a painting of my soul,
obsidian sunshine and heavenly bodies.
It's how I came to know the moon.
I don't belong among moon and star,
the heavens are meant for angels
and I have never held such grace.
You bear your cross
as I kneel beneath my branches.
The sky will swallow us both one day.
I might cry because you're gone,
but goodbye will never kiss my lips.
You've evaporated into a beautiful whisper
and I, into the clouds.
Equinox is a painting of my soul,
obsidian sunshine and heavenly bodies.
It's how I came to know the moon.
I don't belong among moon and star,
the heavens are meant for angels
and I have never held such grace.
You bear your cross
as I kneel beneath my branches.
The sky will swallow us both one day.
I might cry because you're gone,
but goodbye will never kiss my lips.
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Re. Don't kiss me, goodbye
27th Jul 2018 7:00am
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28th Jul 2018 6:33pm
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Re. Don't kiss me, goodbye
27th Jul 2018 12:24pm
Phenomenal writing
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If I could write like this, that's all I would do 24/7
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If I could write like this, that's all I would do 24/7
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Such a kind thing to say, PoetSpeak, I appreciate it and the RL more than you know.
Poetry 24/7, that woud be my dream job...
If only...
Poetry 24/7, that woud be my dream job...
If only...
Re. Don't kiss me, goodbye
Anonymous
27th Jul 2018 2:12pm
How you create such beauty with such aching emotion is beyond me. I agree with PoetSpeak. This is gorgeous, Kasai.
...Willow
...Willow
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Re: Re. Don't kiss me, goodbye
28th Jul 2018 10:08pm
Thank you so much sweet lady, for those beautiful words and bright smiles of yours...
Re. Don't kiss me, goodbye
27th Jul 2018 2:20pm
ah the ache is palpable and i think its universally relatable but your words make even a heartache beautiful with all its broken pieces.
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Re: Re. Don't kiss me, goodbye
28th Jul 2018 10:10pm
A heart is definitely a beautiful thing, even when broken and what a perfect way of putting it.
Thank you so much...
Thank you so much...
Re. Don't kiss me, goodbye
27th Jul 2018 4:14pm
I've never been held in such grace...the unworthiness palpitates...a real gem dear
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28th Jul 2018 10:13pm
Re. Don't kiss me, goodbye
28th Jul 2018 1:10am
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Perfectly said, wise one, and thank you so much for stopping in. Honored to be on your list of favorites...
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Anonymous
28th Jul 2018 2:59am
I see a reflection of the creator in the creature. A beauty far beyond the chants of modern poetry. It is a beauty that comes from the knowledge of the divine relms of the deities of the past. Truly beautiful ink
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Ah yes, how very perceptive of you. No matter our beliefs or Gods/Goddesses, the sky sees us beneath her vast reach in all our brokenness. Thank you for the thoughtful words...
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2nd Aug 2018 3:01am
Re. Don't kiss me, goodbye
2nd Nov 2018 2:48pm
a sad but heavy with Hope and Belief -- Wow! & super Beautiful - nearly took my breath away!
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Re. Don't kiss me, goodbye
29th Nov 2018 4:15am
oh how i missed reading you!
woww you are amazingly wild with a floral nostalgic scent
(a little conffession)
cant wait til i can relax with wine to read you,
forever adored beautiful! <3
woww you are amazingly wild with a floral nostalgic scent
(a little conffession)
cant wait til i can relax with wine to read you,
forever adored beautiful! <3
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