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Retribution
Just anarchy and chaos breed
Implanted with his demon seed
And her world tilts this way and that
As soon as he picks up his hat
She did her righteous best to please
Approaching him on bended knees
Lavished his member with her tongue
Sucked 'til cum was finally sprung
Now he's headed somewhere west
Ducked out the door before she dressed
She follows him into the sun
Packed up with her Colt Magnum gun
Implanted with his demon seed
And her world tilts this way and that
As soon as he picks up his hat
She did her righteous best to please
Approaching him on bended knees
Lavished his member with her tongue
Sucked 'til cum was finally sprung
Now he's headed somewhere west
Ducked out the door before she dressed
She follows him into the sun
Packed up with her Colt Magnum gun
Published 22nd Jul 2018
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22nd Jul 2018 10:38pm
oh the scorn of a jilted lover....I hope he packed enough horse power
Very entertaining write Crow!
Very entertaining write Crow!
22nd Jul 2018 10:46pm
22nd Jul 2018 10:40pm
22nd Jul 2018 10:50pm
Didn't mean to leave you hanging. Next she readies, aims and fires. Might come up with a sequel though. No telling how good a shot she is. The pursuit may continue.
23rd Jul 2018 1:05am
Bravo!! Very very nicely done!
Very quick and oh so smooth!
((((((( Crow )))))))
Jackie
RL
Very quick and oh so smooth!
((((((( Crow )))))))
Jackie
RL
24th Jul 2018 1:00am
23rd Jul 2018 1:12am
I loved this and your whole gun theme you have going. ;) My favorite..
"She did her righteous best to please
Approaching him on bended knees
Lavished his member with her tongue
Sucked 'til cum was finally sprung
"She did her righteous best to please
Approaching him on bended knees
Lavished his member with her tongue
Sucked 'til cum was finally sprung
24th Jul 2018 1:01am
I'm not really all that much into guns anymore. I use them as a prop for poetry. Thanks Pandora!
24th Jul 2018 1:19am
23rd Jul 2018 1:56am
24th Jul 2018 1:02am
dearest Sir Crow dangerous lady
he should have known better than mess with her..
excellent...
love Crim
he should have known better than mess with her..
excellent...
love Crim
24th Jul 2018 1:05am
Me, I like them with a dangerous, unpredictable streak. A tall order!
These days I'd really settle for a pussycat.
These days I'd really settle for a pussycat.
23rd Jul 2018 8:04pm
Neat little story in so few lines. Also enjoyed the ryhming couplets, gave the whole thing pace.
24th Jul 2018 1:07am
I get a kick out of rhyming. It's kind of like a game, but it can add pace, as you say. Thanks Rjm!
24th Jul 2018 00:06am
