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between my fingers
I couldn't hold on
to it
I couldn't hold on
to the final
sunset of
summer
I couldn't hold on
it
the last few
precious
breaths
of life
I couldn't
hold on
to it
I couldn't hold
on to
love
(c) 2018 R.R. Zinn
Published 20th Jul 2018
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20th Jul 2018 9:32pm
Nicely done B-Kitty... put a shiver down me spine, it did.
I did notice that life was given up before love was lost which speaks to your perseverance.Ely
I did notice that life was given up before love was lost which speaks to your perseverance.Ely
20th Jul 2018 9:58pm
