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Life Struggles
hungry Haiku 5-7-5
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hungry Haiku 5-7-5
Body is a temple
obesity's so awful
choices that aren't simple
Written by
slipalong
Published
10th Jul 2018
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Re. hungry Haiku 5-7-5
Medinda
2nd Sep 2018 6:35am
Nice. This actually had something to say that's real and deep. So many are just softly connected word put down to the line count.
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Re. hungry Haiku 5-7-5
slipalong
2nd Sep 2018 6:38pm
thank you Medinda short but said a lot ! you may like to read: Sugar plantation: and :Slim chance: my stuff has a hard edge on not always popular subjects
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