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my immortal

 
I look to you like a lost love does
gazing at the stars
I pluck one from the universe
being named for us
the story of our coming together
is told in the cosmos
 
I crush the star
and shoot it into my veins
I start to trip
visions of you and I  
in a faraway place
 
you're here to bring me home safely
I've been going wild, a little too native
you're my commander
I listen to you in my soul's heart
as you quietly sing the song of our peoples
 
great warriors of old
a fierce society with strict rules
but they are needed  
here my tyranny has gone unchecked
 
I've been using my magic  
to alter the course of history
you've come to keep a close eye on me
we are beings from a far off galaxy
light years away
I miss home
 
you make me want to return
but I will face punishment there
for crimes against humanity
to this, I answer our people hungered for war
I gave them what they asked for  
over the centuries
I wonder has the council gone soft?
 
the court is in session
it's being held where I sit
I'm pardoned and told to return safely
 
I look to the stars
and wonder how long until my mission is finished
when will I return to the blue
and see your face again
my immortal love
 
Written by crimsin (Unveiling)
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