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Hypnotizing
crucify your god
give him notice
tired of the rod
biblical hocus pocus
fuck the upright
downtrodden ways
blinded by might
ignorant in prayer
judging all
with snide remarks
still they crawl
because angels hark
bigotry their power
absent of condition
the final hour
filled with contradiction
from the pulpit
hatred rising
jaded culprit
hypnotizing
lost souls scatter
nothing ever matters
the lord smites
human rites
another bastard race
dysfunctional soul
Lucifer fell from grace
continuing as a whole
no child good enough
unless perfection
demons like it rough
just natural selection
judging all
with snide remarks
still they crawl
because angels hark
bigotry their power
absent of condition
the final hour
filled with contradiction
from the pulpit
hatred rising
jaded culprit
hypnotizing
give him notice
tired of the rod
biblical hocus pocus
fuck the upright
downtrodden ways
blinded by might
ignorant in prayer
judging all
with snide remarks
still they crawl
because angels hark
bigotry their power
absent of condition
the final hour
filled with contradiction
from the pulpit
hatred rising
jaded culprit
hypnotizing
lost souls scatter
nothing ever matters
the lord smites
human rites
another bastard race
dysfunctional soul
Lucifer fell from grace
continuing as a whole
no child good enough
unless perfection
demons like it rough
just natural selection
judging all
with snide remarks
still they crawl
because angels hark
bigotry their power
absent of condition
the final hour
filled with contradiction
from the pulpit
hatred rising
jaded culprit
hypnotizing
Published 10th Jul 2018
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10th Jul 2018 4:15am
Jesus Christ Dave , no pun intended ! Relax
Wow what a fireball of feelings u express here.
You know my opinion, religion is organized crime .
Loves you broWrite on!
Jackie xxx
Btw excellent structure and execution you your writing has grown so much!
Wow what a fireball of feelings u express here.
You know my opinion, religion is organized crime .
Loves you broWrite on!
Jackie xxx
Btw excellent structure and execution you your writing has grown so much!
12th Jul 2018 1:03am
Lady Z.. thanks so much.. yeah, i was writing very short verses.. and it went well.. now kinda incorporating different styles, into songwriting.. i appreciate your continued support.. much love..
Dave
Dave
10th Jul 2018 3:36pm
12th Jul 2018 1:04am
Brenda, my sister.. i always try to rock out.. appreciate the add.. love you..
Dave
Dave
