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The Heavy Hitters
the heavy hitters put down their bats one day
and walked off the field
too disgusted to even look back
the place wasn't as they remembered
no one saw me cry when they left
no one that mattered
Cruel was as his name
he would rip into you
and then ask let me squeeze you
in the next moment
Hemi is still here but he is silent these days
perhaps a revolt will come
I know he's ready should it be
though I know he'll hate me for saying so
Craic is a dear friend
though I'm sure he wonders
where my head is lately
you can always count on him to crack a joke
then write a damned fine cracker of a poem
he always leaves me stumped
AL and Missy thank God for you
the new blood Layla gives me hope
for brighter poetic horizons
damned if I didn't forget to write her a letter
the heavy hitters
who would fuck your mind
it's cruel we've been stripped down
and wrapped in saran wrap
Todski fuck me man so grateful to see you
I know your poetic cock
is strong enough to pop through
our politically correct plastic wrapping
come one and all
let's light some fires
stir shit up fuck the boundaries
it's 8 weeks and I'm not dead yet
Author's Note
let me squeeze you a poem by Cruelhandedwriter
8 weeks not dead a poem by Deathproof
8 weeks not dead a poem by Deathproof
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Re. The Heavy Hitters
9th Jul 2018 10:45am
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9th Jul 2018 10:47am
thank you dearest Whipped this isn't about fucking beautiful it's about mind fucking by some very powerful poets..
love Crim
love Crim
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9th Jul 2018 11:11am
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9th Jul 2018 11:56am
Im sensing bad blood here.. The poem is of dedication, not of sex. I feel there may be miscommunication and hope that this comment may clear it up a little...
With Love
~M
With Love
~M
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Re: Re. The Heavy Hitters
9th Jul 2018 2:35pm
thank you dearest Tryston for the help yes it is a poem of dedication to dear poets..
love Brenda
love Brenda
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Re. The Heavy Hitters
9th Jul 2018 11:12am
Being new on here a lot of stuff seems to hit the fan. interesting if I must say so, wow what line huh, LOl, let the ink flow, or maybe let the finger tap.
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Re: Re. The Heavy Hitters
9th Jul 2018 11:13am
thank you dearest Poet
for showing love on this write
and welcome to the brood..
love Crimsin
for showing love on this write
and welcome to the brood..
love Crimsin
Anonymous
- Edited 30th Jul 2018 7:47am
9th Jul 2018 11:28am
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9th Jul 2018 11:36am
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9th Jul 2018 2:37pm
Re. The Heavy Hitters
9th Jul 2018 11:54am
I wish I'd ever hit hard. I feel my poems like no one else and the issue is that no one else feels them. My tongue speaks demons of pains they know nothing about. I hold this poem dear and strive to make the list.
Stepping up to the plate,
~M
Stepping up to the plate,
~M
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Re: Re. The Heavy Hitters
9th Jul 2018 2:38pm
dearest Tryston it could be i'm just not paying attention enough lately... I will be checking you out..
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re: Re. The Heavy Hitters
9th Jul 2018 3:07pm
Thank you, Miss Brenda. I would appreciate it greatly. :)
(PS: I was calling Dia my babe...not you. I dunno if you thought I was calling you that but I wanted to clear up the air around that and get us all on the same page.)
Keep writing,
~M
(PS: I was calling Dia my babe...not you. I dunno if you thought I was calling you that but I wanted to clear up the air around that and get us all on the same page.)
Keep writing,
~M
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9th Jul 2018 3:40pm
Re. The Heavy Hitters
9th Jul 2018 12:12pm
Wow, Crimsin, unfortunately I don't know these poets you speak of..but after reading this, makes me want to. Luv this.. 😍
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Re: Re. The Heavy Hitters
9th Jul 2018 12:16pm
They're all damned good..even I'm unfamiliar with a few of those legends but they must be good for dear Crim to write off them.
Love you, babe,
~M
Love you, babe,
~M
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Re: Re. The Heavy Hitters
9th Jul 2018 2:39pm
thank you dearest Diamond for showing love on this write just missing some voices..
love Crimsin
love Crimsin
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9th Jul 2018 2:40pm
Re. The Heavy Hitters
9th Jul 2018 1:08pm
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9th Jul 2018 2:41pm
thank you dearest Tim for feeling this write yes they a left a mark..
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re. The Heavy Hitters
9th Jul 2018 1:47pm
maybe they found something better to do
i miss seeing a some of these guys updates
i miss seeing a some of these guys updates
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9th Jul 2018 2:42pm
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Anonymous
- Edited 11th Jul 2018 9:51pm
9th Jul 2018 2:04pm
Gone
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Re: Re. The Heavy Hitters
9th Jul 2018 2:43pm
lol Missy you're too funny I know me too thank you for being here beautiful :)
love Brenda
love Brenda
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Anonymous
10th Jul 2018 2:28am
Brenda, love this.. i'm not perfect, i write mean.. but i'm a cuddly bear you know that.. love you sis..
Dave
Dave
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Re: Re. The Heavy Hitters
10th Jul 2018 7:21am
thank you dearest Dave maybe it's time for the legends to be reborn.. love you style..
love you..
Brenda
love you..
Brenda
Re. The Heavy Hitters
11th Jul 2018 10:34pm
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11th Jul 2018 10:38pm
thank you beautiful giggles this one is kind of rough but i'm learning...
love you..
Brenda
love you..
Brenda
Re. The Heavy Hitters
14th Jul 2018 8:21pm
We aspire to be like them. If only to have a small amount of the talent they had!
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Re: Re. The Heavy Hitters
16th Jul 2018 1:54am
thank you graciously dearest Xmar I'm so grateful you are here your own poetic voice is powerful in its own right...
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re. The Heavy Hitters
22nd Aug 2018 6:18pm