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cum Master
thug hard I've been thinking about you
you're a real man
who lays it out rough
got my pussy creaming
dreaming of what you can do
thoughts of you riding my ass
pounding out an s.o.s
this lady is in need of a screwing
you step up to the plate
and slam it in
working the rim
then driving it deep
making my tiny hole scream
pulsating my pleasure
as you go treasure hunting
sinking it deep
receiving my sweet cream
as I call out your name
but you aren't finished yet
you want me to taste your girl's pussy
she's been watching
as you plunder my virgin ass
you command
"lick her ho"
shaking I go down on her
tasting her wild berry flavor
a beauty of a girl cos that's your style
her bud swollen from my affections
you say
"hold on girl it's my turn to fuck her
I'm the only one who can make her scream
or didn't you know
I'm the pussy master?"
you enter gently
cos you got real feelings for her
making love to her
you demand I watch you
listening to her moan
I get jealous
cos you're the man I dream of
you command
"woman suck my cock
lick up her cream and don't waste a drop"
mmm sweet berry flavor
on your swollen head
I swirl, dip and suck
until you cum down my throat
cum blasted by the Master
my fantasy satisfied
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Re. cum Master
9th Jul 2018 00:12am
a real blast of erotic sensuality using words to thrust sexual energy into the reader..great fun...primal is fun...loved it Brenda
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9th Jul 2018 00:15am
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Anonymous
- Edited 9th Jul 2018 00:14am
9th Jul 2018 00:13am
Marvellous Lust. A dream a man can only see realised in his deepest fantasies. My god, the picture is so vivid. You are a true mistress of description dear poetess. I am mesmerised by the excellence of the poetic description. Brava. J.
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9th Jul 2018 00:18am
thank you graciously dearest Juvenalis
for the love on this write and for feeling me..
love Brenda
for the love on this write and for feeling me..
love Brenda
Re. cum Master
9th Jul 2018 1:09am
......images of Mandingo lust, cocoa butta' and honey cream streamin' down. #luvsexy
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9th Jul 2018 1:14am
mmm love your vision of this write and this feeling Mr. M
thank you :)
love Crimsin
thank you :)
love Crimsin
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9th Jul 2018 1:15am
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9th Jul 2018 1:26am
thank you dearest Reggie
I think we're flowing on the same wavelength right now ;)
love Crim
I think we're flowing on the same wavelength right now ;)
love Crim
Re. cum Master
9th Jul 2018 2:21am
Miss Brenda!
First of all: Holy shit. That has me thinking some wild thoughts.
I appreciate this dive into fantansy world and with how I've been recently...I've needed a good fucking...even if only in my mind...a good...Mind Fucking, forgive my puns. I'm so dearly fond of them.
And this right here is what I needed. A mix of both adrenaline and sexuality. You have yet again left me in awe of your words. May your hands outlast my soul so they may write well into my future.
Until next time, love and hugs,
Tryston
First of all: Holy shit. That has me thinking some wild thoughts.
I appreciate this dive into fantansy world and with how I've been recently...I've needed a good fucking...even if only in my mind...a good...Mind Fucking, forgive my puns. I'm so dearly fond of them.
And this right here is what I needed. A mix of both adrenaline and sexuality. You have yet again left me in awe of your words. May your hands outlast my soul so they may write well into my future.
Until next time, love and hugs,
Tryston
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9th Jul 2018 2:25am
dearest Tryston I'm ecstatic over your reaction to this write :) I'm so happy you felt the energy here.. I always write when I'm in the mood.. I'm so glad it comes across to the reader...
thank you my friend..
love Brenda
thank you my friend..
love Brenda
Re. cum Master
9th Jul 2018 2:22am
"pulsating my pleasure
as you go treasure hunting
sinking it deep
receiving my sweet cream
as I call out your name"
Did you say Train?..I had the feeling you were talking to me...if so then fuck yes...where are the papers to sign....be right there...let me grab my toothbrush....
big smiles...this was a horny journey...really hard* not to desire such an erotic mind...
love always
Jeff
*intentional pun
as you go treasure hunting
sinking it deep
receiving my sweet cream
as I call out your name"
Did you say Train?..I had the feeling you were talking to me...if so then fuck yes...where are the papers to sign....be right there...let me grab my toothbrush....
big smiles...this was a horny journey...really hard* not to desire such an erotic mind...
love always
Jeff
*intentional pun
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9th Jul 2018 2:26am
giggles dearest Jeff you're so sexy ;) so happy you felt the feeling of this write.. i'm ecstatic the creamy vibe comes across.. p.s. love your pun it gave me tingles :)
love Crim
love Crim
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9th Jul 2018 3:56am
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9th Jul 2018 4:07am
thank you dearest Poet I be a Batwoman :) I deeply appreciate you checking me out..
love Crimsin
love Crimsin
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9th Jul 2018 3:58am
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9th Jul 2018 4:08am
thank you graciously dearest Shakesperan I'm happy with thoughts that this may be an inspiration :)
love Crimsin
love Crimsin
Re. cum Master
houghts of you riding my ass
pounding out an s.o.s
this lady is in need of a screwing
This made me laugh because I can really picture it.
It reminds me of this I wrote this for fun
A few minutes ago lol
There once was a man from Fontana
with a cock like a big ripe banana
He would bounce it all day
when his girl went away
but for now it’s a soft lump of clay...
This beautiful clever write is entertainment at its best Brenda my lovely sexual nymph I adore your mind❤️
Love always
Write on mama write on!
Jackie ❤️
pounding out an s.o.s
this lady is in need of a screwing
This made me laugh because I can really picture it.
It reminds me of this I wrote this for fun
A few minutes ago lol
There once was a man from Fontana
with a cock like a big ripe banana
He would bounce it all day
when his girl went away
but for now it’s a soft lump of clay...
This beautiful clever write is entertainment at its best Brenda my lovely sexual nymph I adore your mind❤️
Love always
Write on mama write on!
Jackie ❤️
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9th Jul 2018 7:08am
giggles thank you graciously beautiful i'm so happy you enjoyed.. your poem made me laugh and gave me big smiles..
I deeply appreciate the love..means the world to me..
love you lady..
Brenda
I deeply appreciate the love..means the world to me..
love you lady..
Brenda
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9th Jul 2018 7:10am
Re. cum Master
9th Jul 2018 10:31am
A very naughty read...I like the taste of that.
I love reading your erotica.
I love reading your erotica.
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9th Jul 2018 10:42am
thank you graciously dearest Dark Sun
I'm so happy you find them pleasing :)
love Crim
I'm so happy you find them pleasing :)
love Crim
Re. cum Master
14th Jul 2018 7:46pm
You raise my attention with these hot, erotic writes. Your insight amazes and thrills me.
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16th Jul 2018 1:44am
thank you graciously dearest Xmar so happy you found this enjoyable...
love Brenda
love Brenda
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