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short change ho
taste the night
it speaks in broad day light
prostitute my feelings
they're for sale
they stand naked on a street corner
waiting to get in a stranger's car
to anywhere but here
hitchhiking whore
gets in a truckers rig
now she gets sold nation wide
loosest ho you've ever seen
the cock of the walk already fucked her
virgin hole tore into
and then opened up
so you could peak inside
lubed, primed and ready to go
slip on in
then cum to shattered feelings
a dream come true
is this little girl here
something you've never seen before
dollar sign eyes
with a pussy cash register
I'll take your cash Sir
then rob you for a hundred
short change artist on the sly
with a wink and a giggle
I give it all up
I made a deal with the devil
the contract is already signed
Author's Note
insanity on being a writer and how I think I prostitute my feelings...
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Re. short change ho
Anonymous
6th Jul 2018 11:14pm
Dearest poetess I feel your sadness and your pain. I wish I could say words to alleviate it, but I know that words can only do so much. Believe me you are a good soul. To hurt you would be a crime. Any being that is up to such harm towards a sweet being like you is not worthy to be a member of the human race. Blessings of love and joy to you, dear one. J.
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6th Jul 2018 11:17pm
thank you graciously dearest Juvenalis for the love it warms my heart deeply this is just a bit on insanity about being a writer and how we prostitute our feelings.. never fear beautiful soul..
love Brenda
love Brenda
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Anonymous
6th Jul 2018 11:28pm
Just know, sweet sister, if I may call you that, that i am here to stand, cry or listen. Whenever you need me. You are truly a beautiful soul. Love to you. Juvenalis
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7th Jul 2018 00:14am
Re. short change ho
6th Jul 2018 11:39pm
See this is what I’m talking about there is no one like you Brenda, your poetry is so visceral it just kills me I love it ! Hence why you are the high priestess the smut queen!
Absolutely raw dear sister. This is so bitter sweat it made me mist, it took me back to when I was a girl...
Well done 👍
❤️ Love Jackie xo
RL
Absolutely raw dear sister. This is so bitter sweat it made me mist, it took me back to when I was a girl...
Well done 👍
❤️ Love Jackie xo
RL
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Re: Re. short change ho
7th Jul 2018 00:08am
aw thank you beautiful Jackie for feeling me so deeply.. you are so beautiful.. I know you will be a well known author some day it's in you :)
love you..
Brenda
love you..
Brenda
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7th Jul 2018 3:38am
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7th Jul 2018 3:50am
Brenda.. you're the lady.. fucking best poet/poetess.. i've ever known.. you put yourself out there, nothing is sacred.. i mean that in a great way.. i still use protection, not sexually.. but my soul.. you make me brave to open up.. and never wanting sympathy.. you're so much stronger than you know.. we need a book from you.. it would be a manual for living.. love..
Dave
Dave
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7th Jul 2018 3:54am
aw Dave you honor me greatly this actually was in drafts for quite awhile but I looked at it and realized it was still true now..thank you Dave with my heart for the love..
I love you..
Brenda
I love you..
Brenda
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7th Jul 2018 5:36pm
Amen Dave! i'm feeling your words ! you are much stronger than you think Brenda for sure sweetheart !
Xo Jackie xo
Xo Jackie xo
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7th Jul 2018 5:47pm
Re. short change ho
7th Jul 2018 10:27pm
I'm more inclined to say you reveal, not prostitute your feelings. Your writing is powerful, not exploitive. Another one for the RL.
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8th Jul 2018 11:18pm
thank you dearest Sir Crow yeah I was just being a bit pessimistic here... yes I reveal my feelings because it is liberating...
I appreciate you for understanding that despite this write..
love Crim
I appreciate you for understanding that despite this write..
love Crim
Re. short change ho
17th Jul 2018 6:18pm
i can feel the despair..
the randomness of her existence
how you excavated this redness
so picturesque and tangible...
life on the auction block with each poem
placing bids on emotional upheaval
stripping the tint from your looking glass
displaying yourself as a wretched
exhibition in the museum
of disturbia
i'm absolutely diggin this
the randomness of her existence
how you excavated this redness
so picturesque and tangible...
life on the auction block with each poem
placing bids on emotional upheaval
stripping the tint from your looking glass
displaying yourself as a wretched
exhibition in the museum
of disturbia
i'm absolutely diggin this
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17th Jul 2018 6:30pm
thank you dearest Soul Soldier I thought you might understand this one and you do... you get the deeper meaning here a part of me knows this to be true but I press on because a writer is what I am and while people dig fantasy it's the real deal they're after...
I deeply appreciate you...
love Crim
I deeply appreciate you...
love Crim
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22nd Jul 2018 11:30pm
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