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a not totally unobservant husband ..
only been married
twenty five years
how can I tell what colour
your eyes
barely had time to take my eyes
off your legs ..
Published 5th Jul 2018
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5th Jul 2018 1:45am
5th Jul 2018 1:51am
5th Jul 2018 1:54am
It's one of those conundrums men you love put you in. I mean half wants you to pay attention to my intellect not body shape. But, then you have to go and get all romantic and stuff, and we can't be angry! LOL!
5th Jul 2018 2:00am
I see no disparity,
my wife is far cleverer than me,
but why shouldn't I also acknowledge
my love for her body ..
my wife is far cleverer than me,
but why shouldn't I also acknowledge
my love for her body ..
5th Jul 2018 2:02am
5th Jul 2018 1:55am
That’s pure desire right there for your beloved wife ..... I love your work
5th Jul 2018 2:04am
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5th Jul 2018 4:08am
5th Jul 2018 4:52am
Love the humor of this piece ...
and being able to make your sweetie smile
is priceless.
Twenty-five years is the blink of an eye when your with someone you love Ely
and being able to make your sweetie smile
is priceless.
Twenty-five years is the blink of an eye when your with someone you love Ely
5th Jul 2018 5:05am
I just celebrated my 25th last week Paul...I would've stolen this little gem back then.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
5th Jul 2018 11:04pm
...as long as you know when those legs came to be I think you will be fine
