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some days

it feels like  
the best thing for you  
is the blissful solitude  

perhaps  
we are meant to be  
a solitary creature  
after all  
 
this social thing  
that is life
the pressure  
and expectations  
that society  
exerts  
kills  
 
some days  
i lay
as clay  
motionless and  
emotionless  
for God knows how long  
at least on the outside
 
and it feels good  
that way  
 
some days
Written by cold_fusion
Published | Edited 14th Jul 2018
Author's Note
My deepest of Gratitude To Alistair Plint(RevolutionAl) for the honoring of the request for honest critique and the enhancement of this scribble with his help...S3, S4!
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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