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An age-old question of the God

One day beneath a tree
Lying in its cool shadow,
I thought-
"Who made these hills & sea?
Who makes the turbulent river flow?"

I was seeking the answers
Somewhere in my confused heart.
I guessed-
"One who gives us tears and fears,
Or one who is our part."

While jogging on the thought's road,
I sensed the emergence of a reply.
It stated-
" Everything is owned & made by the God.
It is the supreme truth, everything else is a lie."

Heart was convinced but brain disagreed.
It rejected every idea of God present in masses.
It ridiculed-
" God is a word used for the greed
To control others by the ruling classes."

Soul was still and quite but
Dispute intensified between the heart and the brain.
Confusion darkened-
"Doors of conclusion were almost shut
And pure soul was all plain."

Argument's rope was cut with agreement's knife.
Finally both agreed in deep remorse.
Conclusion ignited-
" God is the name for the cause of life
And it is the source of every force."

Body organs coordinated with each other
And obeyed organ-soul brotherhood.
Religions preach-
" Man shouldn't do bad deeds whether
Others are bad,grey or good."

Sky of thoughts was now fully clear.
Heart lost, brain lost but soul got the win.
Definition of God-
" One who motivate us to fight fears
Against the living devils and their sin."
Written by Akhilsonu (Akhil)
Published
Author's Note
Wrote it during school days (2003).
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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