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The DUP Murders
In 1991 a ruthless and savage massacre occurred in the halls of the Deepunderground Hundreds of poets lay dead. Graffitied stained walls seem to tell a very grim and unlikely story behind the brutal murders. HadesRising, knew it was time to get together a team of expert writers to help figure out what really happened on that night of doom....
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Zazzles a most peculiar witch, aka Broom, The sweeper aka The Verbal murderess known for her unique and abusive writes
taking no prisoners.
Gahddess_Worship a DUP favorite aka
The “Wordsmith aka The Story Teller” would be sure to offer some keen insight, having figured out who really shot J.R Ewing back in 1980!
CrimsinUnveiling DeepUnderground’s own
High Priestess aka The Enchantresses aka The Smut Mistress knows where darkness lurks, having a lifetime membership at the devils table.
Crowfly Admirer of beauty aka The Bird
aka The Wise One known for his patience and ability to see through nonsense
Lord Viddax Analytical Annihilator
Known for His unnerving and uncompromising expert advice of everything.
Todsky The Mac Daddy, aka The Charmer
Aka The Truth seeker can put a stopper
in any conspiracy theory
Lady Layla aka The Masterpiece Maker
aka The Stunner, without a doubt will put a verbal beat down on anyone wishing to challenger her minds eye!
To this day some say the writings of the fallen linger in current reading lists, bewitching us all...
To be continued ...
~~~~~~~~~~~
Zazzles a most peculiar witch, aka Broom, The sweeper aka The Verbal murderess known for her unique and abusive writes
taking no prisoners.
Gahddess_Worship a DUP favorite aka
The “Wordsmith aka The Story Teller” would be sure to offer some keen insight, having figured out who really shot J.R Ewing back in 1980!
CrimsinUnveiling DeepUnderground’s own
High Priestess aka The Enchantresses aka The Smut Mistress knows where darkness lurks, having a lifetime membership at the devils table.
Crowfly Admirer of beauty aka The Bird
aka The Wise One known for his patience and ability to see through nonsense
Lord Viddax Analytical Annihilator
Known for His unnerving and uncompromising expert advice of everything.
Todsky The Mac Daddy, aka The Charmer
Aka The Truth seeker can put a stopper
in any conspiracy theory
Lady Layla aka The Masterpiece Maker
aka The Stunner, without a doubt will put a verbal beat down on anyone wishing to challenger her minds eye!
To this day some say the writings of the fallen linger in current reading lists, bewitching us all...
To be continued ...
Written by
Zazzles
(Broomie)
Published 3rd Jul 2018
| Edited 6th Feb 2021
Author's Note
Was inspired for hadesRising comp.
However, it’s just for fun!
However, it’s just for fun!
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. The Deepunderground Murders
3rd Jul 2018 4:09am
beautiful Jackie I am so honored this is wonderful
this is a masterful and enchanting write :)
love you lovely one...
Brenda
this is a masterful and enchanting write :)
love you lovely one...
Brenda
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3rd Jul 2018 4:18am
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3rd Jul 2018 4:19am
Zazzles, I love your profile pic "my pretty" 😂 I am humbled to be included in this fascinating menagerie of talented poets. My exhibit would be near the restrooms 😊 I think you put my sleuthing skills on a much too lofty pedestal... I still don't know who shot JR. I am in accordance with your opinion of these other magnificent poets, including yourself ma jolie amie ❤ Bravisima!
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3rd Jul 2018 4:26am
Hehe you can’t say you don’t know who shot JR!
I’ll have to edit the story lmbo!
I’ll have to edit the story lmbo!
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I truly believe in your writing
And I am the honored one. The fact that you put this in your reading list makes me feeling unbelievably accomplished tonight 🎶
Thank you GW!
❤️Zazzles
And I am the honored one. The fact that you put this in your reading list makes me feeling unbelievably accomplished tonight 🎶
Thank you GW!
❤️Zazzles
Re. The Deepunderground Murders
3rd Jul 2018 2:41pm
What a thrill to read something totally refreshing and fun. You have a talent in writing mystery with humor. I just love that. To write good humor one needs wit and you have nailed it here.
Zazzles, i highly encourage you to consider writing novella, concentrating on character development just as you have done it here where each character even with flaws become lovable. And ofcourse, we all love a twist in the end, that aha moment :)
Thank you for mentioning me, i'm very honored amongst some of the best talents on this site and best of luck in the comp.
Zazzles, i highly encourage you to consider writing novella, concentrating on character development just as you have done it here where each character even with flaws become lovable. And ofcourse, we all love a twist in the end, that aha moment :)
Thank you for mentioning me, i'm very honored amongst some of the best talents on this site and best of luck in the comp.
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3rd Jul 2018 7:43pm
Lady Layla, I am humbled , how wonderful to see you on my page and a RL no less, I am truly inspired. Hahha Novella!! If you only knew my struggle with even that word Eeek!
Thanks for the advice, however I lack the talent / and structure and, the education needed in facilitating such a bold move towards my writing . It’s always nice to dream 💭 eh? 😂
Cheers Lady Layla 😁
❤️Zazzles xx
Thanks for the advice, however I lack the talent / and structure and, the education needed in facilitating such a bold move towards my writing . It’s always nice to dream 💭 eh? 😂
Cheers Lady Layla 😁
❤️Zazzles xx
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3rd Jul 2018 5:05pm
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Re. The Deepunderground Murders
3rd Jul 2018 9:53pm
Love your list of the stalwart members of DUP, Jackie. Broom, of course, is one of the best here. I see you had fun writing this, but it may be more fun to read. Great job!
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4th Jul 2018 2:05am
Ahh yes the Bird!!!
Yes this was / is a thrill to write glad you are part of this ride !
Loves you Thomas❤️
Broomie xo
Yes this was / is a thrill to write glad you are part of this ride !
Loves you Thomas❤️
Broomie xo
Re. The Deepunderground Murders
4th Jul 2018 00:56am
Well that brought a smirk to my lips and a joy to my heart. Can clearly see you enjoyed writing this piece, and it has me hooked!
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4th Jul 2018 2:06am
Viddax, ha! There could be no investigation without your expertise knowledge, believe that! I I am glad you’re enjoying the ride !
Loves you ❤️👍
Zazzles xo
Loves you ❤️👍
Zazzles xo
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Anonymous
4th Jul 2018 1:10am
Lady Zazzles.. great ink.. involving the cream of the crop of poets, and poetesses.. nicely done.. much love, and respect..
Dave
Dave
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4th Jul 2018 2:07am
Dave my friend , hope you are well it’s nice to see you on my page! I’m glad you are enjoying this story that I’m creating !
You actually will be part of it as well and a few others ?!
Loves you
Zazzles xo
You actually will be part of it as well and a few others ?!
Loves you
Zazzles xo
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Anonymous
4th Jul 2018 2:41am
Lady Zazzles.. that would be an honor.. love you, sister..
Dave
Dave
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Anonymous
4th Jul 2018 1:19am
Love this!
Amazing job!!
I know all their names and read all their stuff
The sense of familiarity you paint is perfect.
Amazing job!!
I know all their names and read all their stuff
The sense of familiarity you paint is perfect.
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4th Jul 2018 2:09am
Hello Ken glad you can relate and enjoy this wild and fantastic tale!
Stay tuned lol there will be two more pages :)
Pen hugs
Zazzles 🐾
Stay tuned lol there will be two more pages :)
Pen hugs
Zazzles 🐾
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4th Jul 2018 6:07pm
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4th Jul 2018 9:15pm
I’m sure he’s loving the mentions Hades
Pen hugs
Zazzles🐾
I hope SnuggleBuck has a chance to read the story.😁
Pen hugs
Zazzles🐾
I hope SnuggleBuck has a chance to read the story.😁
Re. The Deepunderground Murders
4th Jul 2018 7:09pm
This is a fantastic poem, Zazzles! Your idea of including DUP members is original, and made your poem more entertaining to read.
Good luck in the competition!
Good luck in the competition!
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Ahh lunachild I much appreciate your comments . Thanks for the good luck !
Zazzles 🐾
Zazzles 🐾
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13th Jul 2018 8:25pm