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That guy
Please listen while reading, thanks.
https://youtu.be/DqRC5tquyU0
The scars she gave were meant to last
more than memories of his past,
mental trophies on his soul she cast
Beaten and bruised the truth hides
deep inside, where guilt and demise
resides...
Did anyone read the news today?
man found emotionally slain
posted on the front page
He’s just somebody she knew
“No, we weren’t friends”
when asked
“we” didn’t exist
It’s just him.
https://youtu.be/DqRC5tquyU0
The scars she gave were meant to last
more than memories of his past,
mental trophies on his soul she cast
Beaten and bruised the truth hides
deep inside, where guilt and demise
resides...
Did anyone read the news today?
man found emotionally slain
posted on the front page
He’s just somebody she knew
“No, we weren’t friends”
when asked
“we” didn’t exist
It’s just him.
Published 2nd Jul 2018
| Edited 3rd Jul 2018
Author's Note
This is not about me or my relastionship.
It’s an obscure view.
It’s an obscure view.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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2nd Jul 2018 10:18pm
I thought so too.. I always write when I listen to music :) Thanks, I was going for obscure...
did I accomplish that jus?
Zazzles 🐾
did I accomplish that jus?
Zazzles 🐾
2nd Jul 2018 10:23pm
That you did. I write with music as a backdrop most of the time unless an idea pops into my mind before I'm out of bed.
2nd Jul 2018 10:29pm
3rd Jul 2018 00:28am
3rd Jul 2018 1:58am
4th Jul 2018 00:25am
3rd Jul 2018 1:08am
I read it at first without the music and seemed like the story was begging for more but now that i heard the song it makes perfect sense. As a matter of fact i think the way you threw a curve with the last couple of lines is brilliant.
3rd Jul 2018 2:04am
I was minding my own business this afternoon in this dreadful heatwave when I played this song, inspiration struck and out came this poem🧐
It is a pleasure to read your reaction to this poem Layla. I am glad you enjoyed one of my many obscure points of view ..
Pen hug
Zazzles 🐾
It is a pleasure to read your reaction to this poem Layla. I am glad you enjoyed one of my many obscure points of view ..
Pen hug
Zazzles 🐾
Anonymous
- Edited 22nd Feb 2020 11:45am
6th Jul 2018 3:32pm
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Awesome Thank you silence I sure appreciate the read and nice to meet you
Cheers 👍😁
Zazzles🐾
Cheers 👍😁
Zazzles🐾
Anonymous
- Edited 22nd Feb 2020 11:45am
7th Jul 2018 1:19pm
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