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and this is how it ends
no
not talking about
the life
rather
about days
the bright
and sometimes regular
episodes in life
full of light
brightness and sunshine
sometimes
of beautiful breezes
and blue skies
and sometimes
of beautiful rains
all
though
come not to a speedy screeching halt
but
a slow marching
of diminishing light
in tandem
with the ever increasing dark(ness)
and then
there is night
.
Published 1st Jul 2018
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1st Jul 2018 1:40pm
When darkness approaches we slow down and life seems to pass us by. Hope you can grab on to something to keep you going.
1st Jul 2018 2:12pm
welcome
is the Poet admired!
welcome
is the gesture, kind.
yes indeed we do my friend! an observation...this scribble, nothing more...as for self...am cherishing the 'days' mentioned in the poem above. The night...seems a bit distance away ATM.
cannot appreciate enough, dear friend your kindness and support.
appreciation
beyond words.
is the Poet admired!
welcome
is the gesture, kind.
yes indeed we do my friend! an observation...this scribble, nothing more...as for self...am cherishing the 'days' mentioned in the poem above. The night...seems a bit distance away ATM.
cannot appreciate enough, dear friend your kindness and support.
appreciation
beyond words.
Anonymous
1st Jul 2018 4:35pm
It`s rare to read
odes
dedicated to
the dealings of nature;
you`ve captured it well here,
my Friend,
particularly the image;
it goes far & beyond
~Dev
1st Jul 2018 11:54pm
Welcome
is the Poetess admired!
Welcome
is the Friend!
beyond words
the appreciation
of the Friend's insight
and review!!
is the Poetess admired!
Welcome
is the Friend!
beyond words
the appreciation
of the Friend's insight
and review!!
2nd Jul 2018 1:21am
2nd Jul 2018 1:45am
Welcome Harry!
Always an honor
your presence on my scribble!
Humbled Sir...
Truly hunbled.
And once again...
Welcome back..joy to see you
Always an honor
your presence on my scribble!
Humbled Sir...
Truly hunbled.
And once again...
Welcome back..joy to see you
2nd Jul 2018 9:15am
This poem is certainly striking, it is just truth, nightfall will always come, alas, light is never forever. Amazing pen, my brother.
~anonshadow
~anonshadow
2nd Jul 2018 3:34pm
Welcome
is the poet admired
Welcome
is the Brother dear!
also welcome
is the review that is kind and insightful.
yes...
that my brother i feel is the norm(though not without exception) that the dark just simply doesn't come upon us in a flash..it's a slow but sure march of it...
honored dear Poet
by your presence
and review!
is the poet admired
Welcome
is the Brother dear!
also welcome
is the review that is kind and insightful.
yes...
that my brother i feel is the norm(though not without exception) that the dark just simply doesn't come upon us in a flash..it's a slow but sure march of it...
honored dear Poet
by your presence
and review!
2nd Jul 2018 3:15pm
dearest Cold One
I feel you are talking about life and death here...
I like how you compared it here...
"
all
though
come not to a speedy screeching halt
but
a slow marching
of diminishing light
in tandem
with the ever increasing dark(ness)"
and then there is night...
profound...
love Crim
I feel you are talking about life and death here...
I like how you compared it here...
"
all
though
come not to a speedy screeching halt
but
a slow marching
of diminishing light
in tandem
with the ever increasing dark(ness)"
and then there is night...
profound...
love Crim
2nd Jul 2018 3:38pm
welcome
dear Poetess admired
my joy
and honor
your presence and the review
kind
you are right
dear wise friend... it is about
life and death
both of humans
and their relationships
often there is not
a straight, crisp and sudden the break
slow but sure
march of the darkness
before it is too late
for the light to ever have a chance
more of a reminder for self.
appreciation
beyond words
of the presence
and the review humbling.
dear Poetess admired
my joy
and honor
your presence and the review
kind
you are right
dear wise friend... it is about
life and death
both of humans
and their relationships
often there is not
a straight, crisp and sudden the break
slow but sure
march of the darkness
before it is too late
for the light to ever have a chance
more of a reminder for self.
appreciation
beyond words
of the presence
and the review humbling.
