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The air tonight
Crisp with rain
A slight chill
Coming through the window
Cigarette smoke
It all reminds me
Of when you were still here
When I was a kid
Staying over your house
Spooked by every tiny sound
The cool air coming in
A car driving up the hill
Fading in the distance
My heart aches for those days
Now so far away
All the things you've missed
But I hold onto these little things
Reminders in the wind
Visiting me tonight
Remind me of you
Before you died
Crisp with rain
A slight chill
Coming through the window
Cigarette smoke
It all reminds me
Of when you were still here
When I was a kid
Staying over your house
Spooked by every tiny sound
The cool air coming in
A car driving up the hill
Fading in the distance
My heart aches for those days
Now so far away
All the things you've missed
But I hold onto these little things
Reminders in the wind
Visiting me tonight
Remind me of you
Before you died
Published 30th Jun 2018
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10th Nov 2018 5:57pm
16th Jan 2019 4:39am
Beautifully written poem, the imagery was astounding and really set the atmosphere. I'm sorry for your loss, but all is not lost, as you have these memories.
