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Insanity
Roses aren't always red,
Violets aren't always blue.
You couldn't hurt me,
And I couldn't hurt you.
We live in a world where sanity is insane
Flaws are beautiful
Pefection is derranged
You see through my eyes
I see through your veins
Your pulse beats fast,
and your blood flows slow.
If you come to me now,
We will continue to grow.
Violets aren't always blue.
You couldn't hurt me,
And I couldn't hurt you.
We live in a world where sanity is insane
Flaws are beautiful
Pefection is derranged
You see through my eyes
I see through your veins
Your pulse beats fast,
and your blood flows slow.
If you come to me now,
We will continue to grow.
Published 21st Oct 2011
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21st Oct 2011 4:15am
I thought it'd be nice if I stopped by and checked out your work :D
I really like this one! I'm big fan of taking something popular and changing it in unusual ways. Just like you've done with the
'Roses aren't always red,
Violets aren't always blue. '
part. I love the flow, and especially the rhyming of insane and deranged. :D
Keep posting. I'd love to read more :D
I really like this one! I'm big fan of taking something popular and changing it in unusual ways. Just like you've done with the
'Roses aren't always red,
Violets aren't always blue. '
part. I love the flow, and especially the rhyming of insane and deranged. :D
Keep posting. I'd love to read more :D
Anonymous
25th Oct 2011 10:09am
I think your piece is insanely clever...witty!
I look forward to reading many more of your poems.
Blue Skies at ya!
I look forward to reading many more of your poems.
Blue Skies at ya!
