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Ode of Agax Seucai
The continent of Agax Seucai is shrouded in fear
Even more so than the raiding of Pemilnir
A once metropolitan city to the east of the Karmar mountains
But all that’s left are wreckage and skeletons
Don’t be fooled by the beautiful landscape of Mardearo
It’s just as dangerous as its equally-named capital
Frass, its northern neighbor, is mostly barren
Yet its capital, Jentitorc, is filled with the eerie laughter of children
The people of Sastattia struggle to survive
As they’re surrounded by wastelands and mercenaries on either side
To the south is Voikia, facing the Sea of Draroto
Their economy is the strongest on the continent, by fishing for moto
Mostly isolated is the island nation of Burcinia
And near the Western Abyss are Hathe and Marrecia
The islands of Ozyrlenia lie in between
Know for exporting rice and beans
Agax Seucai and Vomera lie divided by the White Ocean
Its northern passage used by sailors who are still guided by the sun
Any ship who ventures south are doomed by Welnaia Waves
Yet it is a shorter path to Vomera, only for the stupid and the brave.
Even more so than the raiding of Pemilnir
A once metropolitan city to the east of the Karmar mountains
But all that’s left are wreckage and skeletons
Don’t be fooled by the beautiful landscape of Mardearo
It’s just as dangerous as its equally-named capital
Frass, its northern neighbor, is mostly barren
Yet its capital, Jentitorc, is filled with the eerie laughter of children
The people of Sastattia struggle to survive
As they’re surrounded by wastelands and mercenaries on either side
To the south is Voikia, facing the Sea of Draroto
Their economy is the strongest on the continent, by fishing for moto
Mostly isolated is the island nation of Burcinia
And near the Western Abyss are Hathe and Marrecia
The islands of Ozyrlenia lie in between
Know for exporting rice and beans
Agax Seucai and Vomera lie divided by the White Ocean
Its northern passage used by sailors who are still guided by the sun
Any ship who ventures south are doomed by Welnaia Waves
Yet it is a shorter path to Vomera, only for the stupid and the brave.
Published 28th Jun 2018
Author's Note
This is the second continent of the world where my fantasy series will be based in. Books 1 and 2 will take place here.
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29th Jun 2018 3:49am
I really enjoyed this poetic journey to a place I gave never been. But your descriptions are exquisite in such a manner that I find myself there :-)))))
29th Jun 2018 3:58am
Thank you, David! I hope that my inspiration last long enough for me to bring the world of Altera Domi alive.
29th Jun 2018 4:03am
29th Jun 2018 4:03am
Anonymous
29th Jun 2018 11:35pm
I absolutely love these pieces of these locations you do. You leave no stone unturned and give the reader everthing needed to be familiar with that place
Amazing job Luna!!
Amazing job Luna!!
29th Jun 2018 11:50pm
