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In to deep

Imagine the murk of murky waters with no clear view ,
Where an enchantress sings a song that seems to be written for you,
Amongst the waves that crumble, your steps they stumble and your confidence begins to crumble,  
Her voice says come to me but I can't swim,    
Her voice says trust in me but the water is to dim  
So loving, I mean so trusting    
I eas out and begin rushing, submerged to my chest , working on controlling my breathe, but start to fear and panick as the troubled waters begin to rise to my neck, and the only safe thing to do  is to go back to the shore or reach out to mi amor. I commit to her for sure, but she still says come out some more. But I'm in to deep,  I panick I grab her, scream at her , she saying take it easy and it will work, I'm squeezing on to her and she's screaming out it hurts, it hurts ,it hurts so much and i realize that we are both going down,  
So I inhale with one final touch and let her go knowing with out her that I will surely drown.
Murk
Written by Murk
Published | Edited 2nd Jul 2018
Author's Note
Love strong enough to let go...
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