deepundergroundpoetry.com
Mask
Not too deep
under the surface
right past the tea and crumpets
pleasantries and chuckles
behind closed doors
lies the world of the unspeakable
the stuff that makes you
stick a dagger in your best friend's back
because he discovered
who is operating the projector
and because you were too much of a coward to
Admit your insecurities
under the surface
right past the tea and crumpets
pleasantries and chuckles
behind closed doors
lies the world of the unspeakable
the stuff that makes you
stick a dagger in your best friend's back
because he discovered
who is operating the projector
and because you were too much of a coward to
Admit your insecurities
Published 24th Jun 2018
Author's Note
This is about the importance to be emotionally honest with ourselfes and others.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 4
reading list entries 0
comments 12
reads 475
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
25th Jun 2018 00:23am
25th Jun 2018 2:35am
25th Jun 2018 1:27am
Dark thoughts today... sometimes those insecurities will lead you a merry chase. It's like you gotta sneak up on them and catch them unawares.
Once you catch yourself in it it's good to admit, don't you think? I would never lash out at someone who tells me they are insecure or touchy about a certain issue.
Being unconcious happens. However did you ever accidently touch on somebody's stuff and all kinds of shit broke loose? You had no clue it was there because the image the person projected was very different. Or they get vindictive because they perceive you as aggressor and they don't want to face their own stuff.
I think there is opportunity in being honest with oneself and others, especially when it comes to the less pleasant topics. If both are receptive it can create trust and intimacy...very important ingredients to a well functioning relationship of any kind.
Being unconcious happens. However did you ever accidently touch on somebody's stuff and all kinds of shit broke loose? You had no clue it was there because the image the person projected was very different. Or they get vindictive because they perceive you as aggressor and they don't want to face their own stuff.
I think there is opportunity in being honest with oneself and others, especially when it comes to the less pleasant topics. If both are receptive it can create trust and intimacy...very important ingredients to a well functioning relationship of any kind.
25th Jun 2018 2:24am
Gotta be careful with other people's "stuff"... it comes up at the wrong time and one can have shit everywhere.
I think it's important to avoid bringing out defensive behavior. Ely
I think it's important to avoid bringing out defensive behavior. Ely
25th Jun 2018 2:26am
25th Jun 2018 3:07am
25th Jun 2018 1:56pm
I helped myself to a water bottle, cleaned up a mess in front of me....what are you talking about? Oh and i found the bling thing that I gave you on my driveway. Which kinda confused me.
25th Jun 2018 2:43pm
25th Jun 2018 5:22pm
25th Jun 2018 5:26pm
Thank you Lildragon....I feel so missunderstood with this poem. Helps me to get your feedback. We all have work to do, so do I.
Best
A.
Best
A.
30th Jun 2018 1:19pm
to me
it is a well conveyed
precise and concise statement
of the truth
yes...it takes a lot
of courage to admit and bare
one's insecurities and be honest..first of all..with self!
indeed it helps with the intimacy...i believe
as a human... we are bound to encounter at times, these landmines accidentally.
well penned.
it is a well conveyed
precise and concise statement
of the truth
yes...it takes a lot
of courage to admit and bare
one's insecurities and be honest..first of all..with self!
indeed it helps with the intimacy...i believe
as a human... we are bound to encounter at times, these landmines accidentally.
well penned.
