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Wasting Time
You try too hard
words put out on display
but fail to initiate
reason or rhyme
just wasting of time
you lead up the cliche parade
twirling your tophat and baton
filling pomp without circumstance
swinging with a very simplistic con
you try to hard, I see
to impress with an enigmatic woe
clueless, in a one man egotistical show
simplistic conceptions implied
another poetess
denied
words put out on display
but fail to initiate
reason or rhyme
just wasting of time
you lead up the cliche parade
twirling your tophat and baton
filling pomp without circumstance
swinging with a very simplistic con
you try to hard, I see
to impress with an enigmatic woe
clueless, in a one man egotistical show
simplistic conceptions implied
another poetess
denied
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24th Jun 2018 4:40pm
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24th Jun 2018 4:41pm
Thanks LDF...it doesn't happen all the time but I've noticed a few things lately.
Re. Wasting Time
24th Jun 2018 4:41pm
and JESUS said: before you point out the speck of wood in a man's eye, wipe the cum out of yours
or something like that
or something like that
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24th Jun 2018 5:42pm
Wow so that's what you think is going on?its possible for people to have friends with nothing going on in between.
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24th Jun 2018 5:59pm
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Anonymous
11th Jul 2018 2:16pm
Intriguing... Gonna have my mind whirling a while now... :-)
...Willow
...Willow
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12th Jul 2018 12:04pm