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Figment
Can we go somewhere far away?
A safe place with warm sunny days
Somewhere lost in time
A place untouched by complication
Filled with hope and adoration
That would be sublime
Your perfect hair in the pale moon light
Flames that dance in your eyes so bright
Such a place could we find?
Love untouched by outside force
Wild and free with no remorse
Is only in my mind
A safe place with warm sunny days
Somewhere lost in time
A place untouched by complication
Filled with hope and adoration
That would be sublime
Your perfect hair in the pale moon light
Flames that dance in your eyes so bright
Such a place could we find?
Love untouched by outside force
Wild and free with no remorse
Is only in my mind
Published 22nd Jun 2018
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Anonymous
22nd Jun 2018 7:10am
Aw, the wistful longing is so clear in this poem. An idyllic place indeed for a lonely soul.
...Willow
...Willow
Thank you as always Willow. This is actually an older piece from a few years back I stumbled upon. Decided to share.
22nd Jun 2018 12:20pm
Oh yes ... such feeling ... enticement ... when can we go? Nice poeting my dear versifier ...
22nd Jun 2018 2:26pm
Such a place would indeed be the greatest place to reside. Thank you for reading. I am happy you enjoyed it.
