SENRYU: PERSPICAX

Me encanta tu poema! La felicidad viene de las cosas mas basicas y sencillas porque tenemos la seguridad que la vida continua y esta bien.

Bravo!

Asi es la vida verdadera y tranquila. Muchas gracias, bella Luna 😊

Estoy de acuerdo con Luna.
Sin embargo, cambiaría la ropa por un suministro de buen vino y queso.
;-)))

And, yes, Google makes me appear more smarter than I are.


Wonderful thoughts you've penned, dear poet..

De acuerdo, ropa opcional ... se requiere queso y vino. 😀

Things we too often take for granted .. 😊

That's for certain. Thank you Jemac!

This is perfect in so many ways ... RL here you come ... I need to read this every day ... especially the last several ... thanks GW ...

Thank you do much, LDF!  I think it is a worthwhi6 mantra. 🙏👎💓

I'm not familiar with the senryu form but I certainly admire these lines.  You find happiness in the basic pleasures of life and poetry, and your writing reflects the joy.  Fine lines, and you're introducing me to a new poetic form.  Thank you!  Might give it a try sometime, but I doubt that I'd have your finesse.

Oh you will, guaranteed...a senryu is a in the haiku, 5,7,5 structure but the subject matter is not of nature but rather human nature...if that makes any sense. Thank you Sir Crow. I look forward to reading your Senryu.