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SENRYU: PERSPICAX
I have food, water
Music, love, and poetry
I dare not complain
Music, love, and poetry
I dare not complain
Published 22nd Jun 2018
Author's Note
Clothing and a roof over my head are a blessing as well 😀
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22nd Jun 2018 1:43am
Me encanta tu poema! La felicidad viene de las cosas mas basicas y sencillas porque tenemos la seguridad que la vida continua y esta bien.
Bravo!
Bravo!
22nd Jun 2018 1:54am
22nd Jun 2018 3:51am
Estoy de acuerdo con Luna.
Sin embargo, cambiarķa la ropa por un suministro de buen vino y queso.
;-)))
And, yes, Google makes me appear more smarter than I are.
Wonderful thoughts you've penned, dear poet..
Sin embargo, cambiarķa la ropa por un suministro de buen vino y queso.
;-)))
And, yes, Google makes me appear more smarter than I are.
Wonderful thoughts you've penned, dear poet..
22nd Jun 2018 4:09am
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23rd Jun 2018 00:00am
This is perfect in so many ways ... RL here you come ... I need to read this every day ... especially the last several ... thanks GW ...
23rd Jun 2018 00:16am
23rd Jun 2018 1:18am
I'm not familiar with the senryu form but I certainly admire these lines. You find happiness in the basic pleasures of life and poetry, and your writing reflects the joy. Fine lines, and you're introducing me to a new poetic form. Thank you! Might give it a try sometime, but I doubt that I'd have your finesse.
23rd Jun 2018 1:27am
Oh you will, guaranteed...a senryu is a in the haiku, 5,7,5 structure but the subject matter is not of nature but rather human nature...if that makes any sense. Thank you Sir Crow. I look forward to reading your Senryu.
