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dual time
All our power now
Run like the sound
Encasing the crown
As twilight inclusive
A meaning obtusive
The flight of your sun...
A shooting conclusion
With singing inclusion
As your energy breaks
The time splitting takes
And my heart will just break...
If but one kiss...
Published 16th Jun 2018
| Edited 17th Jun 2018
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16th Jun 2018 8:10pm
Another masterpiece ... such splendid rhyming ... again so so envious ... the last line is ... breathtaking ... I have been reading and rereading this over and over again ...
My pleasure dearest...I am a better writer now in no small part to the sensitive support you have given me...highlighting strengths...thank you forever
love
Jeff
love
Jeff
Time won't stop the love...I can feel the heartbreak dear Jeff...love your sentiment.
A beautiful melancholy write.
love
Jasmine.
A beautiful melancholy write.
love
Jasmine.
17th Jun 2018 6:31am
Anonymous
18th Jun 2018 1:09am
You have an excellent grasp on traditional style with the classic ebb and flow.. I very much enjoyed tius piece.
18th Jun 2018 2:56am
