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SUNNY MOONY
SUNNY MOONY
Sun am I you ought to know
who am I
giver of life
creator of what is
and
also the destroyer of what should not be
I am narcissistic
I am ego
follow me where ever I go..
Okay
Moon you are and now have your say
you are my reflection anyway
if you want to come and with me stay
Unveil your beauty and let me see
what of mine are you a creativity
else sulk in the darkness of your side
you from the world so hide
your darkness behind
besides fifteen days you inevitably hide
that is some one else's design
Remember me
without me you are
NOTHING
just a broken mirror
strewn into pieces
Sun am I you ought to know
who am I
giver of life
creator of what is
and
also the destroyer of what should not be
I am narcissistic
I am ego
follow me where ever I go..
Okay
Moon you are and now have your say
you are my reflection anyway
if you want to come and with me stay
Unveil your beauty and let me see
what of mine are you a creativity
else sulk in the darkness of your side
you from the world so hide
your darkness behind
besides fifteen days you inevitably hide
that is some one else's design
Remember me
without me you are
NOTHING
just a broken mirror
strewn into pieces
Published 16th Jun 2018
Author's Note
Some one asked to compare
Sun me and Moon she
how did she dare
Sun me and Moon she
how did she dare
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17th Jun 2018 1:16pm
I like it. I like the lines, "else sulk in the darkness of your side" and "besides fifteen days you inevitably hide, that is some one else's design". I also like the broken mirror at the end because what good is being a reflection if the mirror is broken? Very cool poem. Good job!
17th Jun 2018 7:15pm
