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Doused In Desire
Hanging over me, I feel
Pulled to you.
As the passion
wells inside me.
I whisper, "How do you want me?"
Into your ear.
The kissing is no longer gentle,
Tasting your ravenous hunger
As you feed on my lips.
I reach down to guide you
Inside me. You push through,
Past my thoughts,
My fears
Past everything,
Until I feel you in my bones.
Your movements,
Our rhythm,
Makes my body feel like
It's been doused in desire
As you ignite it
With your spark.
I burn until I'm consumed
Leaving only the echos
Of my pleasure.
Pulled to you.
As the passion
wells inside me.
I whisper, "How do you want me?"
Into your ear.
The kissing is no longer gentle,
Tasting your ravenous hunger
As you feed on my lips.
I reach down to guide you
Inside me. You push through,
Past my thoughts,
My fears
Past everything,
Until I feel you in my bones.
Your movements,
Our rhythm,
Makes my body feel like
It's been doused in desire
As you ignite it
With your spark.
I burn until I'm consumed
Leaving only the echos
Of my pleasure.
Published 16th Jun 2018
| Edited 16th Sep 2018
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16th Jun 2018 4:48am
loved the build up...your pov...really pulled me through...very pleasurable read
27th Sep 2018 3:27am
16th Jun 2018 9:19am
Liked build up, favourite lines:
My body is doused in desire
As you ignite it
With your spark.
I burn until I'm consumed
My body is doused in desire
As you ignite it
With your spark.
I burn until I'm consumed
13th Aug 2018 6:48pm
Anonymous
16th Jun 2018 6:02pm
Uniquely put ...
An arousing piece of write here..
Keep these.pages burning with desire
An arousing piece of write here..
Keep these.pages burning with desire
Anonymous
- Edited 23rd Aug 2019 11:45pm
13th Aug 2018 6:43pm
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13th Aug 2018 6:52pm
29th Aug 2018 00:42am
29th Aug 2018 1:19am
Anonymous
- Edited 7th Sep 2022 7:45pm
19th Sep 2018 7:45pm
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Hi, Lady Charlotte 🌸
I hope you've been smiling, loving, and keeping the sweet warmth of your sizzling ink glowing.
I love erotic poetry when it speaks as softly and sensuously inviting to my senses as this one does.
The imagery of your lead-in line is gently, warmly, and irresistibly alluring in such a way I could not quit, even if I wanted, and I didn't. ; )
This, M'Dear, is what excellent sensual poetry is all about … captivating, holding onto, and not releasing your reader until you're sure they've been aroused and filled to overflowing.
My warmest smile of thanks for such a lovely thrill shared on your page, Dear Charlotte ⁓ Richard 🍃
(PS: Drop by for a read … I have a new one you might enjoy.)
23rd Oct 2018 4:37pm
23rd Oct 2018 7:34pm
Aw, Charlotte Dear,
You are so warmly welcome.
Yes, I "loved" it mucho. ; )
I see you've changed your picture … as much as i adored the other one, this one is absolutely stunning! ; p
You are so warmly welcome.
Yes, I "loved" it mucho. ; )
I see you've changed your picture … as much as i adored the other one, this one is absolutely stunning! ; p
23rd Oct 2018 7:37pm
Anonymous
- Edited 8th Feb 2019 10:53am
18th Oct 2018 10:35am
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