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Temper
The temper of your fucking won't resolve
Itself, indifferent from all the thoughts
Rolling through my mind - they seem so bold
And resolute, until the idea's caught
And you hold it to ransom - it's repressed
With sweet discretion then - it risks offence,
Vivacity might entertain int'rest:
My kiss means your thrusts start - so I'll commence
To match the pace you urge upon me now;
I'll stop this sour distraction - I won't think,
But seek to please and illustrate just how
I'll be your pleasure pet - right to the brink,
Where I hold still and hear your ululation,
As you cum with a tempered celebration...
Itself, indifferent from all the thoughts
Rolling through my mind - they seem so bold
And resolute, until the idea's caught
And you hold it to ransom - it's repressed
With sweet discretion then - it risks offence,
Vivacity might entertain int'rest:
My kiss means your thrusts start - so I'll commence
To match the pace you urge upon me now;
I'll stop this sour distraction - I won't think,
But seek to please and illustrate just how
I'll be your pleasure pet - right to the brink,
Where I hold still and hear your ululation,
As you cum with a tempered celebration...
Published 16th Jun 2018
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16th Jun 2018 12:41pm
16th Jun 2018 3:27am
16th Jun 2018 8:27am
Thank you - it probably needs work - but thank for the encouragement and the nudge to write too
16th Jun 2018 9:27am
The lines:
Where I hold still and hear your ululation,
As you cum with a tempered celebration...
suggest a "sexual Hallelujah" to use the words of Leonard Cohen about his song with regard to his mentions of David and Samson in that well known song he wrote.
Where I hold still and hear your ululation,
As you cum with a tempered celebration...
suggest a "sexual Hallelujah" to use the words of Leonard Cohen about his song with regard to his mentions of David and Samson in that well known song he wrote.
16th Jun 2018 9:42am
16th Jun 2018 4:41pm
16th Jun 2018 7:01pm
