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Enough
There you are
Sliding down rainbow's slippery slope
There is no pot of gold at the end
El Dorado is a ghost town
Stop chasing
The game is over
You just dodged a bullet
Isn't that enough?
Sliding down rainbow's slippery slope
There is no pot of gold at the end
El Dorado is a ghost town
Stop chasing
The game is over
You just dodged a bullet
Isn't that enough?
Published 15th Jun 2018
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15th Jun 2018 5:50pm
15th Jun 2018 6:04pm
Have an image of the town boarded up for a storm but it missed so we should rejoice
15th Jun 2018 6:22pm
Yes, you got it....that was what happened. We just got some nice, gentle rain. I am untying the knot in my stomach.
15th Jun 2018 7:36pm
15th Jun 2018 7:39pm
15th Jun 2018 10:19pm
It sounds as though you just watched a Spaghetti Western... a little mad at yourself, but relieved none-the-less.
15th Jun 2018 10:44pm
Nice interpretation...
I had different elements inspiring this poem....so plenty of space for making up a story.
I had different elements inspiring this poem....so plenty of space for making up a story.
15th Jun 2018 11:20pm
16th Jun 2018 00:40am
We don't need no stinkin' badges...or badgers in Tombstone !
Doc says we can make it to Sierra Madre if El Dorado is bankrupt !
https://silverscreenings.org/2016/03/04/badges-we-dont-need-no-stinking-badges/
Doc says we can make it to Sierra Madre if El Dorado is bankrupt !
https://silverscreenings.org/2016/03/04/badges-we-dont-need-no-stinking-badges/
16th Jun 2018 5:11am
17th Jun 2018 3:40pm
well conveyed.
indeed enough.
it should be.
but say that to the humans... the ones
naturally averse to contentment.
indeed enough.
it should be.
but say that to the humans... the ones
naturally averse to contentment.
18th Jun 2018 5:23am
19th Jun 2018 2:53am
Be happy with what you've got. That's what I read into this poem, Angelast1.
19th Jun 2018 3:39am
