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[ FS ] Fine Wine And Art Appreciation
Intoxicated
or
bewitched
I watch her disrobe
Then
cupped in hand
fish bowl of a glass globe
lazily tips
Oh, my ...
how the red wine
trickles in between those
puffy pursed lips
in its delicious
roughly drafted pass
goes straight on through
to her rose hips
not to mention
the flushed cheeks
of a fine dimpled
derriere waggling behind
back there swaying in trips
to the powder room
And the more I consume
the more I find that my critique
of her poetry in motion is weak
in hindsight
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