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Chanter Gangsta
I Got My Angst , I Got My Anger ,
You Can Call Me A Chanter Gangsta
Pull Words Out Like Some Verbal Shock
Got To Talk My Talk And Walk My Walk
Scrabble Some Minds , Speak Those Blind
Elocution Attack , Words Stacked , Oral Signs
Instigating , Not Hesitating , No Call Waiting
Translating , Accelerating , Emancipating ,
If Need Be , Then Penetrating , Devastating ,
Deprecating , Then Stimulating , Communicating ,
Call Me Insolent , Then Time Well Spent
Without Repent Hope You Get The Point I Sent !
You Can Call Me A Chanter Gangsta
Pull Words Out Like Some Verbal Shock
Got To Talk My Talk And Walk My Walk
Scrabble Some Minds , Speak Those Blind
Elocution Attack , Words Stacked , Oral Signs
Instigating , Not Hesitating , No Call Waiting
Translating , Accelerating , Emancipating ,
If Need Be , Then Penetrating , Devastating ,
Deprecating , Then Stimulating , Communicating ,
Call Me Insolent , Then Time Well Spent
Without Repent Hope You Get The Point I Sent !
Published 7th Jun 2018
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7th Jun 2018 5:41am
It feels a little ...odd?
I get the motivation
and I get the inspiration
but the flow... seems to slow down and stumble
every now and then ( as though it had to struggle)
like a hiccup, then it picks up the flow and off you go.
I get the motivation
and I get the inspiration
but the flow... seems to slow down and stumble
every now and then ( as though it had to struggle)
like a hiccup, then it picks up the flow and off you go.
7th Jun 2018 7:14am
Just different gears , Ely...gotta shift them , now and then...
Those who expect from me , no matter how well
intentioned , I shall always throw a monkey wrench
into the equation , just because I can !
Those who expect from me , no matter how well
intentioned , I shall always throw a monkey wrench
into the equation , just because I can !
Oohhh... izzat so?
"Just because I can."?
I expect nothing, of you amigo.
...and am not suggesting you change.
But if you put your poem out for our perusal... isn't it a bit naive
to expect that we will all see your work the same way you do?
You did request honest critique... no? JMHO
"Just because I can."?
I expect nothing, of you amigo.
...and am not suggesting you change.
But if you put your poem out for our perusal... isn't it a bit naive
to expect that we will all see your work the same way you do?
You did request honest critique... no? JMHO
That was not meant strange , nor toward you , Ely !
It is merely stating , that I often change things up ,
online and in real life , "just because I can"...
I surprise myself many times , when I "expect" myself
to do things a certain way...we all "expect" certain types
of behavior , or style from people in life...
And as you have seen a number of my works , you know
I have certain rhyme schemes , subject matter , etc...
So for me , when this one came out , I thought it felt
different , but I don't feel rough...
I have no qualms about your comments...I appreciate them
and don't do things for praise...I just do them , and follow
my Muse...
One of the problems of posting online , is people are not
seeing body language , or the face or eyes of the person
when they post...often it is not even in "real time"...
I think I woke up to go to the bathroom , when I checked
my computer , maybe 11:00 pm , and was half (2/3) asleep ,
so it was just a quick acknowledgement , rather than an
in depth reply ;
I just woke up now...not even awake fully , eyelids still closing...
And just so you know , I grew up , reading books like the
"Monkey Wrench Gang" , or "Illuminatis" by Robert Anton Wilson
hung out with the Discordians , Erisians , Church Of The Subgenius
and many Chaos magicians , and those who "revere" the gods
"Snafu" , "Fubar" and "Murphy"...chaos gods of the universe...
So my comment about "monkey wrench" , is merely part of
my normal nature...I love chaos as much as order...got to !
So if you took my statement as flippant , now you may have
a better understanding of me , and realize it was not meant
strange...But I am definitely strange !
It is merely stating , that I often change things up ,
online and in real life , "just because I can"...
I surprise myself many times , when I "expect" myself
to do things a certain way...we all "expect" certain types
of behavior , or style from people in life...
And as you have seen a number of my works , you know
I have certain rhyme schemes , subject matter , etc...
So for me , when this one came out , I thought it felt
different , but I don't feel rough...
I have no qualms about your comments...I appreciate them
and don't do things for praise...I just do them , and follow
my Muse...
One of the problems of posting online , is people are not
seeing body language , or the face or eyes of the person
when they post...often it is not even in "real time"...
I think I woke up to go to the bathroom , when I checked
my computer , maybe 11:00 pm , and was half (2/3) asleep ,
so it was just a quick acknowledgement , rather than an
in depth reply ;
I just woke up now...not even awake fully , eyelids still closing...
And just so you know , I grew up , reading books like the
"Monkey Wrench Gang" , or "Illuminatis" by Robert Anton Wilson
hung out with the Discordians , Erisians , Church Of The Subgenius
and many Chaos magicians , and those who "revere" the gods
"Snafu" , "Fubar" and "Murphy"...chaos gods of the universe...
So my comment about "monkey wrench" , is merely part of
my normal nature...I love chaos as much as order...got to !
So if you took my statement as flippant , now you may have
a better understanding of me , and realize it was not meant
strange...But I am definitely strange !
