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LOL p.s I hate you
I really hate facebook
No really, I do
Everyone I ever knew is on there
Sometimes more than once
500 friends and still no one to talk to
Everyone commenting
But no one’s really saying anything
LOL
Have I mentioned how much I hate you?
Oh look Farmville... again
Gods help me
Another comment box is coming up
I’m being poked from so many different directions
Does anyone own a phone anymore?
HAHA thought someone might remember my birthday
No that was facebook to
Of course
Poke me again and I swear I’ll strangle you with that mouse cord!
Wireless...?
I’ll show you wireless
Family I have never met before wants to add me
Just because we share the same last name
Does not mean I want to know you
I just saw pictures I wish I hadn’t
I think I need to gouge my eyes out
...I’m being poked again
That’s it I’m killing someone!
For the record I told you so
Prepare to die!
LOL
p.s I hate you
No really, I do
Everyone I ever knew is on there
Sometimes more than once
500 friends and still no one to talk to
Everyone commenting
But no one’s really saying anything
LOL
Have I mentioned how much I hate you?
Oh look Farmville... again
Gods help me
Another comment box is coming up
I’m being poked from so many different directions
Does anyone own a phone anymore?
HAHA thought someone might remember my birthday
No that was facebook to
Of course
Poke me again and I swear I’ll strangle you with that mouse cord!
Wireless...?
I’ll show you wireless
Family I have never met before wants to add me
Just because we share the same last name
Does not mean I want to know you
I just saw pictures I wish I hadn’t
I think I need to gouge my eyes out
...I’m being poked again
That’s it I’m killing someone!
For the record I told you so
Prepare to die!
LOL
p.s I hate you
Published 18th Oct 2011
| Edited 26th Oct 2011
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18th Oct 2011 4:13pm
gr8 post....i Love how u showed sum of da ills of a virtual world....but nuthin can replace human contact....
thank you very much I think sometimes people got so lost in the virtual world we forget what interacting with real people is like ..suddenly you can't stand being around anyone if there not on a computer screen ..its kind of sad I never want to be like that
real life friends are amazing even if they start out on the internet :)
real life friends are amazing even if they start out on the internet :)
18th Oct 2011 6:42pm
ur so rite bout dat....i hav always been da face 2 face type....u neva no wut u can talk ur way n2...;)
20th Oct 2011 10:22am
anyway....
but about the poem, I agree, it's a little upsetting how it's hard to get through to people about things like this, but then most of them enjoy living in a ecstasy of human contact so as to not feel lonely, online or otherwise. and any attempts to avoid this and seek emotional truth and honesty leave you either feeling lonely, or being told that you SHOULD feel lonely. "don't even start trying to get anywhere in life, my freinds don't know you, so I don't know you. when they do then we can talk"
to that, I say fuck that. but then I want to be known, so the whole vicious circle repeats...
but about the poem, I agree, it's a little upsetting how it's hard to get through to people about things like this, but then most of them enjoy living in a ecstasy of human contact so as to not feel lonely, online or otherwise. and any attempts to avoid this and seek emotional truth and honesty leave you either feeling lonely, or being told that you SHOULD feel lonely. "don't even start trying to get anywhere in life, my freinds don't know you, so I don't know you. when they do then we can talk"
to that, I say fuck that. but then I want to be known, so the whole vicious circle repeats...
I feel there is alot of truth in that, kind of one of the big pulls for me about joining DU was being able to mingle with others so easily not because you needed to have known them previously
free flow of thoughts opinions and just throwing somthing out there saying hey I made this
and no ones going to be beating you down for it
I'd like to know the artists behind to work as much as the work it self but I know everything in time :)
sure I'll get there eventually
thanks for the comment bootselectric
free flow of thoughts opinions and just throwing somthing out there saying hey I made this
and no ones going to be beating you down for it
I'd like to know the artists behind to work as much as the work it self but I know everything in time :)
sure I'll get there eventually
thanks for the comment bootselectric
11th Mar 2013 6:02am
