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the last good thing
in my hands,
a bird
small
delicate
trembling
wounded
last
breath
the sky
begins
to
cry
(c) 2018 R.R. Zinn
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- Edited 27th Dec 2019 12:45pm
5th Jun 2018 6:12am
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5th Jun 2018 6:47am
Thank you Daffodil. The bird can be a literal bird, or a symbol for the loss of something precious inside of us (like hope,
faith or love) .
Pax
buddhakitty.
faith or love) .
Pax
buddhakitty.
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5th Jun 2018 4:20pm
Well at least the little darlin' spent it's last moments in a warm hand... a most evocative poem. Well done.
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