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It Counts

It counts
it all counts  
the perfect chosen word  
what is spoken and what is heard  
  
interactions and reactions  
the smiles of your eyes  
the feelings felt inside  
oh how they make me melt  
   
I swam naked in your soul  
drying off under a heated sun  
creating moments understood  
just like you knew I would  
   
strolling off in the night's review  
not leaving you behind  
two lover's lost inside
with dreams steadfast entwined  
   
drifting with the glow of the moon  
searching stars and all of you  
caresses revealing all  
true beauty, I'm left in awe
Written by JusTim_
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