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In Motion
bicycle ride
banana seat
young kids
boy and girl
tree’s whisper
her arms
cling me
so tight
excited
stomach
tied
in knots
wanting
her
close
to me
frosty
freeze
ice
cream
sharing
a cone
and
dreams
riding back
so nervous
awkward
goodbye
sentence
interrupted
planted kiss
on my lips
thirty
years
ago
today
set
everything
in
motion
banana seat
young kids
boy and girl
tree’s whisper
her arms
cling me
so tight
excited
stomach
tied
in knots
wanting
her
close
to me
frosty
freeze
ice
cream
sharing
a cone
and
dreams
riding back
so nervous
awkward
goodbye
sentence
interrupted
planted kiss
on my lips
thirty
years
ago
today
set
everything
in
motion
Published 4th Jun 2018
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4th Jun 2018 2:28am
this is so beautiful Dave
brought back my own memories..
gorgeous ink..
love you..
love Brenda
brought back my own memories..
gorgeous ink..
love you..
love Brenda
4th Jun 2018 2:58am
Brenda.. so glad you enjoyed.. so honored to make your reading list.. you always make me smile, with your comments.. love you..
Dave
Dave
4th Jun 2018 2:51am
4th Jun 2018 2:59am
Anonymous
4th Jun 2018 3:15am
I.....JUST....ADORRRRRRRRE....THIS!!!!!
MINE!!!!
Xoxo Taryn
MINE!!!!
Xoxo Taryn
9th Jun 2018 3:00am
Lady Taryn.. your kind words melt my heart.. honored to make your list.. love you, my sister..
Dave
Dave
4th Jun 2018 3:30am
Great snapshot of times as a younster....and then some.
I like the flow of this.
A.
I like the flow of this.
A.
9th Jun 2018 3:01am
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5th Jun 2018 4:26am
I used to have a bike like that, this brought back memories of that, cute piece..
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