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It Comes to Me

it comes to me
when I'm not thinking
in the evening
as I'm sinking

into the world
we go when sleeping
the otherworld
which is deep in

between
before and after
one day's tears
another's laughter

it comes to me
I feel your breath
your unseen thoughts
which have left

and penetrated
flowing through me
resonating
we are truly

synchronized
before we dream
we both merge
in the same stream

of consciousness
it's in your mind
it's in mine too
it's how we find

ways to touch
and ways to feel
that what we know
is really real -

it comes to me
when I'm not thinking
in the evening
as I'm sinking

into the world
which is deep in
the otherworld
we go when sleeping
bcpoet
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