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I Just Wish
I just wish we could sit and read poetry
To each other all day!
Lie in each other’s arms
And with our emotions we’d play.
Read between the lines,
With our heartbeats intwined,
We’d ride on a rhyme,
To drift far away!
We’d go sonnet for sonnet,
Prose for prose,
Romance and erotica,
Read sensually and slow.
I’d like to take you on a journey,
With your hand in mine.
Make love to your intellect.
As we’re lyrically inclined.
Let’s connect on a level,
Spiritually metaphysical,
And relish in the orgasmic
Effects of the residual.
We’d gaze into each other’s eyes,
Tantric love making poetry,
Let’s take the day off from the world.
Come take my heart and flow with me.
To each other all day!
Lie in each other’s arms
And with our emotions we’d play.
Read between the lines,
With our heartbeats intwined,
We’d ride on a rhyme,
To drift far away!
We’d go sonnet for sonnet,
Prose for prose,
Romance and erotica,
Read sensually and slow.
I’d like to take you on a journey,
With your hand in mine.
Make love to your intellect.
As we’re lyrically inclined.
Let’s connect on a level,
Spiritually metaphysical,
And relish in the orgasmic
Effects of the residual.
We’d gaze into each other’s eyes,
Tantric love making poetry,
Let’s take the day off from the world.
Come take my heart and flow with me.
Written by
Lyrically_Inclined
Published 1st Jun 2018
| Edited 2nd Aug 2018
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Re. I Just Wish
1st Jun 2018 4:46pm
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1st Jun 2018 4:48pm
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1st Jun 2018 5:00pm
And relish in the<<<<<<<<<<<<<< orgasmic>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
and this is all what life is about sex lust and love
and this is all what life is about sex lust and love
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Re. I Just Wish
1st Jun 2018 7:17pm
This is beautifully written. How I wish we can all find someone like this because they are one of a kind. A great piece. I really enjoyed it.
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1st Jun 2018 7:51pm
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1st Jun 2018 7:52pm
Re. I Just Wish
2nd Jun 2018 2:46am
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2nd Jun 2018 1:13pm
Re. I Just Wish
2nd Jun 2018 6:25pm
This was absolutely amazing! What a pleasure it would be to have such a gift with someone...
I loved these phrases -
"Make love to your intellect.
As we’re lyrically inclined."
"Come take my heart and flow with me."
I loved these phrases -
"Make love to your intellect.
As we’re lyrically inclined."
"Come take my heart and flow with me."
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2nd Jun 2018 7:55pm
Re. I Just Wish
5th Jun 2018 2:54am
I really like your works, particularly this one.
There is this girl I am just starting to date... I hope to be able to recite this to her in the not too distant future.
There is this girl I am just starting to date... I hope to be able to recite this to her in the not too distant future.
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5th Jun 2018 2:13pm
Re. I Just Wish
2nd Aug 2018 4:39pm
your poem's theme of poetry felt a bit redundant. I especially like your rhyming and rhythm in lines 17-20.
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Re. I Just Wish
15th Sep 2018 3:45am
Hey LI.......amazing....wishful......dreamy......what a beautiful perfect day this would be......enjoyed this very much......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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15th Sep 2018 11:19am