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awakened
the sun
called
"OUTSIDE!
OUTSIDE!
COME AND
SEE!"
I followed
school yard
nearby
recess time
children
running,
laughing,
calling out
is this the
sound
of
God?
(c) 2018 buddhakitty
Published 1st Jun 2018
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1st Jun 2018 2:47am
Anonymous
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1st Jun 2018 6:44pm
I couldn't agree w/ you more my dear. We just need to be alert to them.
buddhakitty.
buddhakitty.
1st Jun 2018 11:34am
Wow ... excellent simplicity ... with such a pithy ending ... beautiful my dear
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Anonymous
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