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Adam and Hungry Eve
Eve being the first female
to be unfaithful.
Fuck me and
My Adam s apple
Fuck holding you back
I should've bitch slap you
Before you ate the forbidden fruit
Now you pregnant
Thinking you looking cute
But naked with two son's
Name Cain and Abel
Wondering if there are my kids
Because from day one she WAS unfaithful
to be unfaithful.
Fuck me and
My Adam s apple
Fuck holding you back
I should've bitch slap you
Before you ate the forbidden fruit
Now you pregnant
Thinking you looking cute
But naked with two son's
Name Cain and Abel
Wondering if there are my kids
Because from day one she WAS unfaithful
Published 26th May 2018
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A not 'happy ever after' view of life after Eden. Interesting view of unfaithfulness (in her case with the tempter). May answer question of those who wonder what Adam may have felt about her over the Fall.
A rhyme (also put in Adam's mouth) came to mind as I read this and saw the Rubens picture:
I should have exercised my right,
Said "Do not eat this fruit in sight,
I am your husband; follow me,
No place to go when you're hungry.
But you got sweet talked by a snake
Who made you doubt the rules God make.
You should have stood up, told him 'NO'"
Now Eden's joys we must forgo.
A rhyme (also put in Adam's mouth) came to mind as I read this and saw the Rubens picture:
I should have exercised my right,
Said "Do not eat this fruit in sight,
I am your husband; follow me,
No place to go when you're hungry.
But you got sweet talked by a snake
Who made you doubt the rules God make.
You should have stood up, told him 'NO'"
Now Eden's joys we must forgo.
26th May 2018 11:25am
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