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Distance
A ten-by-twelve foot room
should not echo quite this way
independent of dimensions
It harbors hidden space
an unacknowledged chasm
that wasn't in the floorplan
before we walked in
should not echo quite this way
independent of dimensions
It harbors hidden space
an unacknowledged chasm
that wasn't in the floorplan
before we walked in
Published 25th May 2018
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26th May 2018 3:08am
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2nd Jun 2018 1:24pm
Buildings draw me in. Beware the room not in the floor plan. Unless you made it.
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8th Jun 2018 1:26am
Thank you, Wanderer. Appreciate both the comment and the listing.
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8th Jun 2018 2:43am
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20th Jul 2019 7:03pm
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20th Jul 2019 00:00am
Unique perspective !
